Stargirl: the Best Hope (version 2)
Added 2020-12-25 23:29:08 +0000 UTC“Stargirl I presume,” Cindy’s grin simmered.
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Ah, this is the good stuff. No magic powers, swirly screens, implants, or drugs. Just good old-fashioned psychology. Read both versions, I think I like this one a little better since Courtney doesn't grab hold of the distress ball quite so completely from the moment she wakes up. Feels more realistic, although I'm probably biased because I tend to enjoy the conflict of these types of stories more than the conclusion.
2021-05-23 07:28:20 +0000 UTCthe way the story ends in a passionate and intimate way.
Hanger644
2021-02-20 16:34:21 +0000 UTCWhat aspect of this style would you like to see?
2021-02-20 16:20:55 +0000 UTCi personally wouldn’t mind seeing more of that style in your stories - to answer your question.
Hanger644
2021-02-20 05:31:38 +0000 UTCThanks! I wrote this one first, actually, but wanted to do the second version too. I used some of the same lines, but this one is definitely a lot more intimate, with her being in her undies for most of it ;p. Do you want more of that in my stories?
2020-12-26 16:26:56 +0000 UTCI think I like this version more, but both are fantastic. Stargirl's defeat and breakdown are very convincing, but there's a more personal side to this version.
Jean
2020-12-26 07:56:23 +0000 UTC
