The Regular Haunts (shelved pitch!)
Added 2021-10-16 18:00:03 +0000 UTCVersion 2.2
There was a point where this pitch diverted in two different directions due to the advice of two different publishers. If anyone reading this is ever thinking about doing something like that, do not! It's better to take the advice of whoever you might be talking to and combine them.
That being said, here are the comic pages for one of those diversions! (The other was just a refined ver. 2, so there isn't really anything to post.)






Again, coloring in CMYK was tough, but I like these colors better than the last ones! Likewise, I had fun with the ghost colors as well. And I definitely feel like the backgrounds improved.
This was the point in which I started thinking about making the characters younger! (to fit that middle grade audience) This sticks in the final version of the pitch, as you can see.
(extra concept art for this version incoming!)