メスルフィ
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The translation is pretty good, for going through a translator. Also love seeing the king of the pirates, become the queen of dicks
Wolfking
2023-03-06 19:45:31 +0000 UTCok tk bro
2023-03-06 04:29:38 +0000 UTCThe text placement is confusing to read, I'd recommend using different colors for whose saying what. So nami would be orange Robin would be purple And Luffy would be red. I'd also put the dialog in a way that draws the eye to them, just to make it easier to read
Hadorian
2023-03-05 22:30:15 +0000 UTC
