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Leak [Short movie] Sketch

Ehhh.... At the start I wanted to make just something short and cute... And I've ended up with this ^^'''


Now to lines! And you, please enjoy! :P Full composed sketch in ATTACH!

PS. To remove nosebleed or not? Cant decide!! >.<'''

PPS. Thanx for all the names suggestions! I've ended up with Rouen(Rou) and Elizabeth (Lis) <3

Leak [Short movie] Sketch

Comments

Not a fan of nose bleed personally but you do what you feel like. I'll take it or leave it.

Nikk

This one's gonna be good when it's done!

Meredith Morgana

Note me please if you have dialogue fix suggestions! ^^

Eipril

I'm crying xD

Vyprae

She looks cute

That guy

I think the nosebleed is a little much. Maybe more of a shock expression. Also I would love to see this with voice actors.

William Noble

Pretty great. ^^ Some of the dialogue could use a little work but it's a fine start. Excited to see more!

Richard Awesome

Nosebleed is fine

Kaizer

i say remove the nosebleed but everything else looks fantastic!

Jasper

nosebleed sucks really

st

Wow, this looks great!

HOWiGOTtheSCARS

I really enjoyed it! Don't see any reason to not have the nosebleed. But I never was a fan of the nosebleed anyway so I can take it or leave it. I'm excited to see the finished product and hope to see a sequel with these two.

Dandorian

Really nice! I dont mind the nosebleed. Just do it like you feel it should be.

LeGourmet

I think it's great so far and can't wait for the finished animation. I don't mind the nosebleed since it's a typical anime thing when a guy sees a hot girl. It won't bother me if you keep it or remove it.

Rox79

This is really nice!!! I think that the nose bleed is an integral part of the scene. Everything is so cute :3

Skeleton Man

This looks amazing so far! Can't wait to see how it turns out

Todesspiel

Миленько С:

I adore it, and AAAAAAAH I'm so happy a name I suggested was chosen :D

Kimio

Haha this is great i love the expressions so much on them and her reaction to the "leak" was great! :3

DohnJohn FlibberSchnidt

It’s perfet, as always. About bleeding i think it should be removed

Nikita Anokhin

The ending is so good! I'd personally drop the nosebleed >w>

Zhet

TELL ME PLEASE WHAT DO YOU THINK

Eipril


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