Echos Chapter 7
Added 2023-12-20 19:59:01 +0000 UTCEchos Chapter 7
A scream wrenched itself from Lienna’s throat as she woke up, her body spasming once again with renewed agony. Though calling it a scream was a gross exaggeration, when in truth it was more a pathetic wheeze, as all of the air from her lungs found its way out through the holes in her throat.
The pain meds had worn off earlier than they were supposed to. Again.
She still couldn’t take new ones until the morning. Or at least, she shouldn’t…
Lienna enviously eyed the crystal decanter on her bedside table. Surely one sip wouldn’t hurt? Certainly not more than-
Agony.
Lienna turned an angry bead of focus towards her traitorous Talent, suppressing it as best as she could while she looked longingly at the potion on the table. Would it really be so bad?
But no, she’d learned that lesson the hard way. It was why she was on her fifth type of anti-pain potion. The-
Agony.
Her frayed willpower gave out, snapping painfully and allowing her Talent to run at full power, unresisted by anything she could manage. Pain lanced through her body and mind a thousand times a second, her body endlessly resetting to the very instant it had been wounded. There was no reprieve, no respite, no Pause from the pain, in more ways than one.
Pause… that distant dream was long-dead. Killed, in some senses, when a Tier 19 ghost of some sort had flayed skin from flesh, flesh from bone, and left Lienne bloody and raw in what parts of her body she still even had. She’d survived, because that was what she did, but whatever that-
Agony.
Whatever that monster had done to her, it had warped her Talent. Overpowered it in such a way that instead of restoring her body to pristine condition, she was reduced to the same sniveling, bloody wreck that she had been when she’d first been wounded. And her Talent kept triggering, pulling her from the brink of death to the brink of death time and time again. It undid healing, it undid further injuries, it undid the modifications she made to her own body, it undid everything.
She was trapped on the brink of life and death, a state of constant torture. She couldn’t bring herself to rupture her core and escape that way, though. She wouldn’t - agony - she wouldn’t give that smug ghost the satisfaction of knowing it had killed her, in the end.
The healers had some fancy-schmancy words for what was wrong with her, how the ghost had hurt her permanently. They knew how to fix her, oh did they know how to fix her. But they wouldn’t. Oh they had their excuses, that nobody on the planet was strong enough to overpower her in the right way, all the best healers were busy with the war, blah blah blah.
She knew what it was all about. Control. Power. She’d seen the contracts they’d offered her. The nigh-slavery, a veritable eternity of it, to cover the cost of the healers doing their bloody job. Not one of them seemed to care that she was in eternal agony, that her body and spirit had betrayed her and left her a flayed husk of herself. They didn’t care that she was Tier 15, that she was immortal, that she’d be able to pay them back eventually. No, they all wanted to take advantage of her, a broken girl, bind her with shackles that would last forever. The army, the guilds, the corporations, the nobles… they could all burn.
Burn forever, in everlasting - AGONY.
Her manager had abandoned her alongside the rest of them, leaving her to suffer the moment she left the Path and didn’t join the army. Dropped her, like the bloody bandages piled up in the far corner, like she was some disgusting thing to be discarded the moment she was all used up.
Her body and spirit were her own. It was why she had joined the Path to begin with, freedom from all the chains that bound. She refused to leap headfirst into bindings far stricter than anything she’d had as a child, not now, not ever.
Lienne tried to force herself back to sleep, but the endless cycles of pain refused her plea.
She lost the battle with her inner self, and she snatched the bottle of painkiller potion and took as deep a drink as the enchantment would allow a single dosage to be. It didn’t do enough. It barely did anything. And now, Lienne had made herself that much more resistant to this particular potion, pushed it that much closer to the point when she’d need a new potion, one even more expensive.
She screamed into her pillow, a faint wheeze muffled all the further by the scratchy, low-Tier sheets she was on. Her hands clenched and fabric tore.
Great. More expenses. As though she didn’t have enough of those.
At least she had her job. She’d tried delving for a little while, but being down an arm and half a leg made that difficult. She was desperate enough to still do it, and it wasn’t like she could get any worse, delving at-tier. The recurring agony of her body made it harder still, and she’d pushed herself until she nearly broke again, simply trying to keep up with the required expenses of delving. Still, she’d been able to get pain potions, and that had helped… until she’d gotten immune to the first one. The pain had eroded away at her mind, her Concept, wore down her willpower until she couldn’t use her Domain. That had pretty much ended her delving.
From there, she’d gotten an AI job. It was nothing special, just data-pushing and correspondence, monitoring some low-level finance for the hospital. Things she could do from her bed, from her chair. But they didn’t pay enough, not enough to pay for her potions, but that wasn’t her fault. If they’d just give her the healing she needed, then she wouldn’t have needed the pain potions to begin with.
They didn’t see it that way, of course, and they’d acted so magnanimous when they fired her, acting like they were doing her such a favor by cutting off her sanity lifeline. According to them, she should just curl up in a hole and either die or wait and hope that some passing high-Tier healer took pity on her which was more likely than the Empires higher Tier healers getting around to a case who couldn't pay for their services. They didn’t care about her, they just wanted her gone.
But then she’d gotten her offer. It wasn’t anything much, just sending in a couple reports about the sorts of things she saw, the kinds of things that anyone could have told them… and it paid just so well. She didn’t know who her employer was, really, but what did it matter? She’d been able to pay for her pain potions, she’d been able to pay for a nurse to assist her in daily life, she’d been able to start saving up- not for healing, that was still beyond her for now- but for prosthetics. Once she had two functional arms, two functional legs, and a full face, then she’d be able to go back to delving, back to advancing.
She was almost there, too. Less than a decade to go.
Agony.
Advancing meant she’d be able to Tier up, again and again until she was Tier 20, and it would be safe for her to form her Intent. Forming her Intent would give her a way out. She’d focus it all on her Talent, not that it would be hard. She’d force herself into something that could modify her Talent, something that could give her an escape from her pain.
It was her mantra, it was her goal. Her only hope of relief.
She got no more sleep that night, and the intervening hours felt like weeks as she waited for the sun to rise. Then, at last, there was a knock at her door.
It was Jake, at long last. Her nurse was the only bright spot in her day, and only partially because he was able to provide her with pain relief and comfort of his own. Maybe some day, when she got a new face, she’d ask him out on a date. He certainly was cute enough, and after all this time she didn’t care if he was three Tiers weaker than her, that he wasn’t fully immortal yet. No, these days her type was basically ‘has skin.’
“Good morning!” He was as cheery as always, and Lienne felt his Concept and skills wash over her, helping her relax and cutting the edge off the worst of her pain. “How did you sleep?”
“Errile,” she wheezed, before activating her AI speaker. “Terrible,” she repeated. “The potion’s failing again.”
“Oh, that’s no good. Just relax… [Ease Pain].” he tapped her forehead, and Lienne sighed as her pain was reduced to something more akin to soreness and itchiness.
“Thank you,” she gasped.
“Just doing my job,” he smiled at her. “Let’s get you some fresh air.”
After Jake helped her get dressed, replacing her bloodstained clothes with clean ones and sending the former off to be washed and purified, she fell into her chair. Though she could control her chair through her AI just fine, Jake’s presence and guidance was always so much more comforting, and his skills not only kept the faint wind and pockets of chilly air from raking across her exposed nerves like so many nails, but also diverted attention away from her. She just couldn’t take another kid staring at her half-melted face in horror, or hiding behind their parent’s legs when she came by.
They strolled down the garden paths surrounding her little home. Even here, the signs of neglect were abundant. Weeds were sprouting, bugs were marching around like they owned the place, flowers were already dying in early spring, and several places the dirt was disturbed from where something had gone where it shouldn’t have.
“Isn’t today such a beautiful day, Lienne?” Jake asked, “The birds are singing, the flowers are blooming, the smell of rain is everywhere, the sky is clear, isn’t it all just so lovely?”
Lienne gave a small noncommittal grunt in response as she watched a worker ant cart off a leaf from a nearby tree towards its corpulent queen, seated in her underground nest not far away.
Jake sighed. “Well, are you planning on watching the Ascension tonight?” he asked, as they passed by a tree long choked to death on midnight blue ivy. He swept the vines clear of where they overhung the path. They shimmered with silver starlight as he did so, narrowly missing her all too-vulnerable flesh.
She didn’t respond, prompting her nurse to keep pushing, “It’s important that you celebrate things like this, Lienne. There’s going to be a stream of the event set up in the cafeteria, I think you should go.”
“Will you be there?” she asked, and he hesitated.
“I can be,” he eventually replied.
“No, don’t go on my behalf,” she brushed off the offer, “Celebrate with your family, I’ll just watch it on my AI if I feel up to it.” She really didn’t want to bask in her misery any more than she had to, and seeing someone from her tournament complete the Path was like raking nails down the bad side of her face to her mind.
“Lienne…” he sighed, “It’s important for you to focus on the good around you. Even for mortals, isolation and focusing on negativity isn’t healthy. For cultivators, you can seriously mess up your spirit if you don’t find at least some joy in your life. You aren’t the only person waiting for a wandering healer, you can meet your peers, your fellows. Celebrate that we have someone else finishing the Path, that someone else is out there protecting the Empire through this war and far into the future. Don’t just waste away in your room. You’re immortal, you have eternity waiting for you once you’re healed. Don’t give up.”
Oh, there was no worry about her giving up. She refused to give up. “Once I get my prosthetics, then I’ll become more social,” she replied, “When I’ve got a face and two arms, and little children don’t scream in terror when they see me.”
Lienne expected Jake to say what he usually did, that one kid didn’t make a trend, or whatever other excuses he’d come up with this time, but he just sighed and kept pushing her chair. Apparently he agreed with her now, that was new.
Instead, he simply moved on to other topics, and the rest of their walk, and the rest of her day, passed as it usually did.
In the end, she ultimately did watch the Ascension. It would be all anyone would be talking about for weeks or months, so she put it on in the background while she lay in bed. Her eyes swept over the revealed identities…
Elizabeth, Matthew, and Aster. Hmph. Of course a princess would be the one to complete the Path. So much for all of that so-called neutrality. No wonder she’d been cast to the side the moment she’d taken a bad hit, she was just some nobody from nowhere. Not the sort of person that the Empire would want representing them in the wars.
Fury burned in the corner of her mind as memories came back to her. They’d been in the tournament twice! No wonder they’d done so well, if they got two chances to fight, to win prizes, when she’d only gotten one. She didn’t know any of them that well, but she had gotten her mana refilled by Matthew once, she faintly recalled. No wonder they’d been able to complete the Path, if that’s what their Domains were like.
Now they were at the peak, where they’d get all the best medical attention. If they ever took an injury, they’d get it healed by people practically tripping over themselves to help out the Princess Ascender. They’d never have to feel the pain of their Talent locking their bodies in a prison of pain, never need to worry about their spirits mutilating themselves.
She was glowering at the projection when a message popped up from her employer. It was asking for a report… about Elizabeth, Matthew, and Aster. Hmph. Well, she didn’t know too much about them beyond common gossip at the tournament, but her employers never had cared much about that before. And the pay…
Lienne had a double-take. The pay was so much more than what she usually got for her reports. It was nowhere near enough to afford a healer, but it could cut down how long she’d need to save for her prosthetics by months, even years.
Well, who was she to refuse? The Empire took care of Ascenders, but she needed to take care of herself.
***
Soddus slapped Girang on the shoulder as he watched the Ascension play out in front of them.
“See, I told you she was a phoenix. Only a phoenix could beat me. I—”
Girang dropped a massive paw over Soddus's face and didn’t let him up until he promised to stop bragging.
Cursing his bad luck and the fact he didn’t also have an Intent, Soddus could only relent.
“Stupid bear.”
Another paw hit him in the back of his head, and he realized he had spoken his thoughts out loud.
Whoops.
***
Long Zhiyuan let out a deep breath as his Second Revelation manifested.
He was only Tier 17, but he had all of his Talent given clones working on making the next stage of his Revelation since he had first broken through to Tier 15, and had been told the secrets of what was required. His Servant had cautioned him, saying that to seek out one’s second Revelation before the twentieth Tier was to court death. Nonetheless, he had taken the gamble, knowing that his spiritual clones could die with no repercussion, and it had truly paid off. He did not know how many times they had failed, but he never suffered any worse than a mild headache for it. After all, without something truly spectacular to ensure his safety, his days had already been numbered.
Shining Lilac, his Sect Leader, had been trying to get him removed for a while now, as he voluntarily stepped out of the Young Master program. Everyone had called him mad, but he knew the truth. He had spent many a long night in meditation, seeking solutions that simply did not exist. He had died many times, and not once did his clones provide insight for how he might grow to Tier 25 in two centuries.
Perhaps he could have gone further, reaching Tier 20 and ensconcing his position as someone to be feared. However, finding one’s Second Revelation at Tier 20 was interesting yet unexceptional. It spoke of caution and surety, not the raw talent of a prodigy. But achieving one’s Second Revelation at the same Tier as the Drowner?
That spoke to the existence of an unstoppable force in the making. Strength above all, yet Long Zhiyuan did not possess that kind of strength, that kind of talent. But he could certainly appear to be such a generational talent. Perhaps not the second coming of the Lady of Ill Dreams, but certainly the kind of talent for whom the very best would be poured out.
He wanted the best, so he gambled.
He gambled that he could unveil his Second Revelation before Shining Lilac managed to get him killed, now that he didn’t have the protections of a Young Master.
Opening his eyes, Long Zhiyuan flexed his Second Revelation and let the entire Sect know that Soaring Clouds Sect's Young Master wasn’t a coward who bowed out of a competition, like Sect Mistress Shining Lilac had been telling everyone.
Best of all, Provincial Governor Adam, from the Tier 47 Smithing Hands Sect, was there for the coronation of their new Young Mistress and felt Long Zhiyuan’s breakthrough.
Long Zhiyuan wasn’t one who gambled without being sure of his success. He also adhered to some form of common decency, and had only made his breakthrough once Young Mistress Tan Ai had finished her initiation ceremony. He remembered the pride he felt at being the center of attention and didn’t want to rob that moment from her.
Provincial Governor Adam and Sect Mistress Shining Lilac arrived before the various Sect elders. All had equal expressions of shock, and Long Zhiyuan reveled in it.
Before Sect Mistress Shining Lilac could speak, Provincial Governor Adam interceded. “And to think that your Sect Mistress scorned you for forfeiting your position as a Young Master. Tell me, Long Zhiyuan, how long have you known you would find your Second Revelation so young?”
“From the very moment I learned what was required, Governor Adam. I simply required some moments of peace, which I could not find as a Young Master,” he replied, the very picture of deferment.
The man chuckled. “Truly, you have shown wisdom and power well in excess of your age and station. Now I ask you, with such a grand spirit, what is your desire? Shall you remain here and rule over those you have exceeded? Or do you yearn for greatness, beyond what may be found here? Should you desire, you will be made a Core disciple of the Smithing Hands Sect, and the greatest treasures you have ever seen will seem as but dust unto you.”
Long Zhiyuan smiled as he stood and bowed deeply to those present. Everything was going exactly according to his plan.
“Thank you for the kind words, Honored Provincial Governor Adam. I am truly humbled by the offer. I must take care of only one thing before I can accept and leave my current sect.”
Provincial Governor Adam raised an eyebrow while everyone else looked shocked.
He withdrew his gloves from his spatial ring and summoned them to his hand, just as he had put them away. Still dripping the blood of the final Young Master he had slain in his last culling. Combat ready, he locked eyes with Sect Mistress Shining Lilac.
“You have held a grudge since I killed your daughter and tried to have me killed on nineteen separate occasions since I left the Young Master program. Before I leave the Sect, this grudge must be settled. Sect Mistress, I challenge you to a duel to the death.”
Sect Mistress Shining Lilac had seven Tiers on him; she was a Tier 24, and she sneered at him. A seven-Tier gap was impossible to jump, and they all knew it.
Provincial Governor Adam looked like he wanted to step in, but as he remained silent, the others didn’t have the face to speak up.
“A whelp who doesn’t know when they are saved wants to throw themselves into the bear's mouth. Learn well in your next life, Bloodhand, that not everything is under your control.”
Long Zhiyuan just got in a combat-ready stance and watched the Sect Mistress. She didn’t bother. Instead, she said, “Did you think I drank your poison? I was trying to kill you, how could I not expect you to try the same thing? I saw you replaced my pills with poison. You are a thousand years too early if you wish to scheme against me. It matters not that you possess your Second Revelation. You dare to stand against me, and you shall fall.”
Long Zhiyuan rushed forward and slashed out. His moves were easily blocked, but he didn’t let up.
As his claws twisted through her defense, he snorted, “The pills were bait, just as the wine was. The real poison was in your sword oil.”
He saw the horror appear on her face as her cultivation failed to respond to her demands. The moment she tried to move at Tier 24 speeds, she found her limit far lower.
Her confidence was her undoing, and in just nine exchanges, Long Zhiyuan gripped her by the neck just as he had her daughter.
A deliberate choice.
He saw the hatred in her eyes. He saw the fear in the Sect Elder’s eyes. He saw the pride in Provincial Governor Adam’s.
Exactly as he planned.
“As I offered your daughter, I offer you the chance to surrender.” He wanted to kill her, but offering surrender was a benefit of the strong, and would solidify his position as a rising star better than simply killing her would.
Despite that, he didn’t bother to loosen his grip. She could speak with her spirit, and he denied her even what paltry air she might seek to claim.
‘Fuck you, yo—’
Good.
Since she rejected his offer, he got to look magnanimous and remove a problem by the roots.
Whatever her next words were, no one knew, as Long Zhiyuan crushed her throat, and with it, her poison weakened spirit.
His Second Revelation was that of the Planner, and he had planned for everything. His former Sect Mistress had her own enemies, those who would be delighted to see the mighty woman brought low. He had used their avarice, their greed as a weapon as sure as any blade.
Wiping his gloved hands on her corpse, Long Zhiyuan dropped the Sect Mistress's body and bowed to the Sect Elders and Provincial Governor Adam. “I am sorry you all had to witness my shameful personal matters, but now that that is settled, I gladly accept your offer. If it still stands, Provincial Governor Adam.”
Provincial Governor Adam laughed. “Junior brother, this senior brother welcomes you to the Smithing Hands Sect with open arms.”
Long Zhiyuan smiled and bowed once more, deeper this time.
His life became a whirlwind. The Smithing Hands Sect truly endowed him with all the greatest treasures he had ever imagined, propelling him forwards in Tier at a truly momentous rate, and even getting him entry to the Thousand Lives Mountain, a vast formation that reminded him of his experience within Minkalla’s sixth floor. Years became centuries as he lived out life after life, each one enabling him to comprehend his Revelations in different ways and master techniques that would be almost impossible for him to learn in reality. It was even superior to what Minkalla could provide, as he could choose to re-experience certain lives time and time again to fully master all that they had to offer. It was usually reserved for the children of Grand Elders, Dao Children… and now him.
He emerged a new man, with millennia of experience honing his Revelations and techniques, his Talent active in each and every simulated “life” he had experienced, and his experience with the device itself providing deeply profound insights into ways in which he could utilize his Talent and Revelations together. On the surface he lived each of those lives to master one thing, he was sure those who ran the Thousand Lives Mountain had some way to track his progress, but at the same time his Talent allowed him to master a dozen other skills or martial arts without anyone the wiser.
His power was unparalleled, but his emergence carried with it a notice that he was not alone.
During his seclusion, the Empire had managed to produce yet another set of Ascenders. As the strongest rising star within the Sects, it would be his duty to join with Dao Child Maven to end their threat once and for all.
Seeing their names, Long Zhiyuan smiled.
Enemies truly did walk a narrow path.
Flexing his claws, his smile grew larger.
Wonderful.
***
Claude sat on a cliff next to Sufyan and occasionally tapped into his mentor's sight to enjoy the setting sun. The fact that he was doing that seemed like it should be the answer to his inner turmoil, but things weren’t so clear.
As a Tier 22 who had fallen off the Hero’s Path at Tier 19, he had the wealth of the Guilds at his fingertips. While no one was pressuring him, Claude knew the facts. They were at war, and needed everyone who was capable of fighting, ready to fight.
And Claude was ok with that. Really, he was ready to do his duty and protect the citizens of the myriad worlds that the Guilds controlled. His Great Power had given him so much, and he needed to give that much back to society, or he would just be a burden on the greater whole.
With his showing as a Hero Candidate, he was given pretty much anything he wanted and things he hadn’t even considered. Most of the things were welcome, new skills, new armor, weapons stronger than anything he could have imagined, even access to trainers who could teach him anything he wanted to know. It was all at his fingertips, but it came with an offer. An offer that, as was made very clear to him, was truly an offer. But Doctor Golden Cricket’s personal offer to heal his blindness was something he wasn’t sure he wanted.
He used his Power to see often enough, like he was doing with Sufyan right now, but being able to see on his own?
He didn’t know if he wanted that, or if he even needed that.
His blindness had been there with him for most of his life. At first, it had seemed like the greatest restriction he could ever encounter, but he had learned that it was an obstacle like any other with Sufyan’s help. His mentor had been instrumental in changing Claude’s worldview about his blindness, and his Power, once awakened, had only reinforced that belief.
He could turn his weakness onto his opponents, and while he had lived every day with darkness, they hadn’t. They couldn’t adapt so easily. It allowed Claude unimaginable progress as a possible Hero for longer than almost anyone else in his generation.
That would be true if not for Quill, Torch, and Scoop. They had done the impossible, and he was only half a step behind them.
Wanting to keep his advantage of being able to blind people had seemed like an easy way to ignore the large implications of healing his blindness, but Sufyan refused to let him act blind, even if he was blind.
If Claude wanted to blind someone after swapping their senses, and his vision was healed, all he needed to do was close his eyes.
Claude was embarrassed to admit he hadn’t thought of that on his own, and it destroyed his largest reason to stay blind.
It should be so easy to accept the healing, but he found himself faltering.
His blindness had been with him forever. Without it, he would have never risen out of mediocrity. Without it, he would have never caught the attention of Sufyan and his Guild. Without it, he wouldn’t have gotten a Power for swapping senses. Without it, he wouldn't have learned how to deal with petty tricks and bullying from his classmates. Without it, he wouldn’t have caused his parents extra stress. Without it, he wouldn’t be as close with his parents as he was.
Without it, would he still be Claude?
He didn’t know the answer to that, and that was why he was so worried.
What if he got his vision back and he killed a portion of himself that had once driven him to greatness? What if we got his vision back and he returned to the version of himself who was no different than any other random civilian.
Claude didn’t like being blind, but it was all he knew. Change was scary, and despite everything he had gone through, he wasn’t sure if undergoing such a change would leave him the same Claude.
He had already vented all of that to Sufyan, who had put to rest all of his doubts, but Claude couldn’t dispel that last bit of worry.
The fact that Doctor Golden Cricket himself was offering to do the healing almost made it worse. The man was a well-known and respected healer for over a dozen active Hero teams. If he was willing to heal Claude, then wasn’t it the right thing to do?
As the sun set, he and Sufyan got up and walked back to the guild hall in silence.
When they reached the outside patio, Sufyan turned to Claude and asked, “Did you find your answers?”
Claude snorted. “Not even a little.”
Sufyan chuckled. “It can be like that.”
Pulling out his vice guild leader medallion, Sufyan flashed both sides.
“My name, you get healed. The guild side, you stay blind.”
Tossing the medallion, Sufyan walked inside. His final words like a whisper making their way to Claude’s ears.
“If you are relieved at the side that comes up, pick it. If you don’t like what it lands on, pick the other. Either way, you will have your answer.”
Claude thought about flipping the medallion right then and there, but it felt wrong.
Instead, he went and started wandering the city.
It was bustling, even at night. Citizens living their lives walking from palace to place, the occasional Hero walking with or flying above the crowds on the lookout for any aspiring Villains.
Claude saw three Villains stalking a dark-skinned Hero in a skimpy outfit, but he didn’t warn her.
Getting beat down because you were too confident was par for the course for a new Hero, and it was a lesson everyone needed to learn. The Villains wouldn't kill her, just like the Heroes wouldn’t kill Villains.
Both were important aspects of society. Not everyone was suited for the light, and not everyone was suited for the darker nature of humanity.
So long as everyone followed the rules, those like Claude, a dozen Tiers higher, would just watch.
He smiled as his spiritual perception noticed two Villains break into a bank vault. The civilians moved to the side, and while the Villains shouted at them, they didn’t try to rob or hurt them.
Just as they were escaping to the streets with their goods in hand, a lone Hero jumped out of an alley and tackled one of the men.
Their brawl created a hole in the surroundings as the crowds parted around them, but they kept any skill or weapon usage to a minimum, which meant the Watchers didn’t even need to interfere.
Claude kept to the edges as he watched the various goings on. He passed low Tier Hero Guilds with just a dozen members working out of abandoned warehouses or garages. He passed similar Villain hideouts in everything from abandoned sewers to penthouses.
He remembered his time cutting his teeth with these trials.
They weren’t just fighting for wealth or status, but rifts.
Claude had made it farther than most ever did, but even he had eventually failed, and seeing those still aspiring to those highs refreshed his very spirit.
It didn’t make his answer any clearer, but he did feel better about it.
Whatever he chose he would be ok with.
Stopping at a few food carts, he grabbed a dozen snacks that he knew his guildmates would enjoy before returning to their headquarters.
As the guild who owned and ran this city, it was all under their control and jurisdiction, but they weren’t an interventionist guild and mostly let things play out underneath them. They only acted as arbiters when needed. To that end, they had their guild headquarters on the outskirts of the city, perched on the side of a mountain. It kept them close enough to intervene, and more importantly in sight of everyone participating, but far enough away that the Heroes and Villains felt like they were in control.
If, or rather when, Claude became a vice guild leader, he would push for them to increase their presence in the city a little, but he mostly agreed with the guild's policies. Too much oversight stifled everyone under them.
And he did intend to rejoin his guild once he felt he had done his duty in the army.
He was already the same Tier as Sufyan, but his combat power was even stronger than the guild leader’s, despite being lower Tier, which meant he could take the position of vice guild leader at any moment. If he wanted, he could even take the guild leader position, but leading was more than strength. Claude didn’t know much, but he knew that.
By the time he returned, the rest of the Guild was already in the gathering room, and he rubbed shoulders with the city's Heroes and Villains who were important enough to get invited to such an event.
The guild leader had felt they deserved to see someone succeeding at the Empire's equivalent of the Hero Path.
Claude smirked as he heard a grumpy-looking Hero grumbling to their teammate, “It's not even that impressive that they completed the Path. I heard The Empire doesn't even make their people fight each other like we do. So what if they can reach Tier 25 in two hundred years if they are only good at killing monsters?”
On the surface, the man might seem correct, but Claude had fought with Quill, Torch, Scoop, and Queen in Minkalla, and he knew how strong they were. The Empire might not focus on having their Pathers fight each other except for their one tournament, but that didn’t mean their Heroes were weak. If it only took fighting other people, then the Sects would have the strongest Heroes, but they didn’t.
When he had realized how similar to the Sects’ Hero program the Guilds’ was, he had asked his Hero Mentor, only to find out the Guilds had once been a part of the Sects. Their ancestors had simply disagreed with the more brutal aspects of Sect society, and as the Great Powers had still been forming, declared their independence. Their shared roots could still be seen in a number of things, though.
Claude was sure the Sects thought they were fools, but he agreed with his ancestors. Competition was good, but there was no reason for death to be the only deciding factor in a battle. Not when it didn’t have to be.
Greatness wasn’t inborn, it was sometimes thrust upon you, you sometimes sought it out, but it was never given. Trials and tribulations were just how you sifted the gold from the sand.
Claude took his place at the front of the viewing platform and ignored the murmurs of those who saw him. Those young Heroes and Villains might think he was impressive and dismiss the Ascension they were about to watch, but he knew the truth. If he was stronger than them, he would be the one walking down a hall to Realm wide praise.
Seeing their identities be revealed, Claude flipped the medallion Sufyan had handed him.
It spun through the air, but as it landed in his hand, Claude knew Sufyan had been correct about the coin forcing him to decide what he really wanted. Secondly, he knew what his choice was.
If he wanted to blind someone, he could close his eyes. But if he wanted to make the greatest difference in the war he was about to join, he needed to open his.
Comments
Claude was a really awesome character during menkalla and seeing him have a moment a growth while getting a better look at the guilds society was an awesome read. I look forward to him potentially joining Matt, Liz and Aster as an ally on the war front to push back a massive attack
David Jenkins
2024-12-13 01:10:51 +0000 UTCOne Echo I was expecting to hear about was Driver from Guild Duel Stars. Matt absolutely stated he would be settling a score once he hit 25. Due to Driver not controlling the Tier 9 who suppressed him.
Xarow
2024-03-08 16:22:42 +0000 UTCInteressting that the ghost was able to corrupt a talent. But I don't think that the Talent is changed. The ghost implemented somehow that her ideal state is when she got that injurie.
Zadar Thule
2024-02-07 22:12:37 +0000 UTCYou know he’s going to be MLA’s nemesis.
Richard Loveless
2024-02-05 00:25:23 +0000 UTCPretty sure we never actually got her real name when we first met her. But I think she was the Pather whose talent let her heal from nearly any injury (basically come back from near death). She was one of the top ranked fighters in the tier 10 tournament.
Adam Fellon
2024-02-02 15:44:58 +0000 UTCWho is Lienne again. I can’t seem to remember who she is.
Richard Loveless
2024-02-01 15:27:17 +0000 UTCHoly s__t, the DARK side of state-based/temporal regeneration... If something messes up your "template", you are SCREWED.
KnightRider007
2024-02-01 11:06:27 +0000 UTCLong Zhiyuan has a seeker like intent that helps with planning and firesight probably, fits really well with his style and talent. Now all that is missing is Han De
Jonas Jalad
2024-02-01 01:48:56 +0000 UTCHard to say what they did and didn't offer. She seems very bitter currently, and we don't have the other side of the story. Either way, it's definitely a tragic story. One that I hope we get to revisit with a happier end.
Drew H.
2023-12-31 23:22:33 +0000 UTCOne we will agree to disagree In parts. One yes I agree it is advance or fall/die. Safety was never a guarantee. 100% agree. The manager I am going to disagree on. The army can't fully say unless I know what the contract states. Difference between a soldier and a slave. One is acceptable, one isn't. Plus I was mot referring to Matthew being a soldier but rather a mana battery for the army to use at it sees fit. Basically his fear in minkalla. Plus heck yeah it could be used for propaganda. Do you think propaganda is truthful and looks at nuance? Anything can be true from a certain point of view and propaganda only tells rhe point of view they want you to see. Look at it this way, young people deciding on guild vs path. They let them know about liana's story and slightly twist it to fit their needs. Then people who would of joined the path, possibly the next ascender(s) don't and instead join a guild that doesn't agree with Manny or worse is a guild from an enemy foreign power that just stole an almost ascender or an ascender and made them an enemy. Thats not to mention maybe the manager was a spy and this was a set up to get liana to turn against the empire. Can think of a certain federation leader that would love to promise her a cure for her problems, only to turn her into one of her mind controlled slaves. That would be very bad. So yeah, small picture, without knowing exactly what was in the contract, I would agree with you. Big picture this could be a festering wound that could, at minimum, lead to a weakening of the empire, if not contribute to its destruction. It's always the little things that have the most impact, because they lewd to the big things. That's what I was getting at with my first post. That they may regret this because it can be used to make more problems for the empire very easily.
Bob Bryan
2023-12-22 22:51:26 +0000 UTCThe Path is a gamble where you either die, advance quickly or drop out with a large medical bill. People might not know what they are getting into when they originally join but by Tier 15? They should know exactly what it's like. The Path itself does not cover healing. It never has. Pathers get priority healing over ordinary delvers but they still need to pay for that themselves. Lienna wasn't able to afford it which knocked her off the Path. This was a risk that she knew and accepted. Her manager left because she was no longer on the Path. Again this is known and accepted since the manager is a benefit provided by being on the Path. The military wouldn't heal her unless she joined the military. Again this is expected and entirely reasonable. So yes, if Matt had found himself in a similar situation and the Empire treated him in a similar manner, refusing to give him handouts and instead requiring him to join before he gains access to the benefits, then I would be ok with that because that is reasonable. My only complaint would be that it doesn't sound like a very interesting story. Regarding the manager, they are there to help her gain as much strength as possible by arranging training and helping to acquire rare hard to find resources. They do not arrange Rift slots unless they want to test their charges or they feel that their charge is slacking off. They do not promise safety. Moreover, at Tier 15 on the Path Lienna would be in her sixties to seventies and would have been delving for most of her life. She would understand her own strength and she would understand the risks inherent in delving a rift four tiers above herself. Doubly so if it had been arranged as a test. She was not forced to enter that Rift. She was experienced enough to judge the dangers for herself and she decided to take the risk. It was her choice. And they didn't abandon her because she didn't sell herself to the military. Like I said, the military isn't a charity. They offer healing to all their soldiers as a basic part of military service but if you aren't part of the military then you aren't eligible for it. And since Pathers are civilian delvers she wasn't eligible. It's that simple. Once she rejected the military they left her at a hospital where she could arrange medical care on her own. As any other civilian delver would be expected to do. There is nothing for critics to use because the Empire has done nothing wrong. They provided the promised benefits while she was on the Path and they did not treat her any differently than any civilian delver in the Empire when she was injured. At worst, they offered her a predatory contract which she was not forced to accept and was free to reject. And even that isn't certain because Lienna is an unreliable narrator. But I think it's clear that we are both seeing things differently. If you still disagree after reading through the above then I can only say agree to disagree.
JauPim
2023-12-22 22:35:15 +0000 UTC1 trusting her manager is now hee fault. We need to know a bit more if she chose that or if her manager pushed her after saying she got this. One would be more on her, one the manager. 2 we don't know how long said contract was for. Her being bound a few years vs being bound 100 centuries are different. Plus, i honestly feel if they would have healed her first and then offered her a resonable contract, i feel she would of taken it. How would matt of reacted if they offered to heal him but only if they let him be used as a battery for them for a few centuires. Would you still be on board for that? Finally this can and probably will be used as propaganda against the empire and the path. She was a very promising recruit and they abandonded her as soon as she became worthless and wouldn't sell herself to emanual and his military dogs. You don't think that's what enemies and critics of the path won't use against them. No nuance will be included. That's more what i meant by saying they will regret this. They turned an asset into a spy for the enemy, a net negative. Civilizations aren't destroyed by one event. It's events like that happen hundreds, thousands, millions of times that add up each time until whatever civilization dies. Happened to literally every civilization on earth. If you do not learn the lessons of the past, you are destined to fall to them.
Bob Bryan
2023-12-22 19:25:41 +0000 UTC@Bob Byran Except that isn't the situation here. Delving is dangerous and injuries that occur while delving are not covered by the Empire and have to be paid for by the delver. Lienna would know this. She was going solo on the Path, which meant her delves would be more dangerous. Lienna would know this. She was injured while delving four tiers up. We do not know who selected the Rift but it was entirely her choice to delve it. If she felt that it was too dangerous then she could have delved a different Rift or just quit the Path. Lienna would know this. She chose to delve and was injured so she has to shoulder the medical costs. This is entirely fair because this is exactly what she agreed to. She knew the risks and decided to continue. As for the military being the only option or trying to use the healing to force her into a contract. They aren't. The military is not a charity, nor are they responsible for her healing. They offered her a contract which would have included healing had she accepted it, basically the same sort of health insurance package that the US military offers its soldiers. She did not accept it. The military isn't the only place to get the level of healing she needs. The various guilds, corporations and noble houses of the Empire likely also have healers on this level or could pay for one. But they are not charities either and she rejected their offers because she did not want to work for them. So she is now left with two options. One, she can wait for an actual charity or a philanthropist healer to heal her. This is naturally going to take time. Two, she can pay for her own healing. This is what she is currently saving for. She is complaining that the private healers only take upfront payments, except that is just how businesses work. The way I see it, she wants to be independent but have the health care that large organisations provide to their delving teams. And she is then complaining that she can't have that.
JauPim
2023-12-22 15:58:00 +0000 UTCNo Sidestory tag
Alexander Hallonblad
2023-12-22 05:12:30 +0000 UTCI think part of that is the fact that fight scenes are, perhaps, the weakest point of this story. Not to say they are bad by any means, but that Mantis seems to be much better at world building, making interesting characters, etc. And a war arc is always going to involve a lot of fighting. It doesn't exactly help that Mantis set up this "world" so that fighting styles get progressively more complicated as people advance. There are ever more skills, talents, and Domain effects to keep track off and utilize in fights instead of being able to focus on a set of key or fixed abilities. And I think you can see that in how MLA have been written in recent fights: Liz has clones, Aster debuffs opponents, and the majority of time has to be spent on Matt because his whole shtick is having enough mana to endlessly use skills. Liz and Aster have been simplified down to a single aspect/role because there's not enough time/mental capacity to flesh out their abilities at this point.
Matt H
2023-12-22 03:22:45 +0000 UTCThere's always an exception especially in a universe as big as this one
Anime Problem
2023-12-21 21:20:48 +0000 UTCeven an Ascender needs to serve thousands of year in the military only for the privilege of finishing the Path. The Empire did invest much in every person on the Path like a tier 40+ manager or the tax breaks for high lvl trainer. So when someone get injured so hard that only the best healers can fix it a service in the military until Ascension is a cheap deal.
Magnuss
2023-12-21 20:39:29 +0000 UTCIt doesn't read to me like her manager dropped her after her injury. As I read it, her manager left her after she left the Path, which always happens. She turned down military recruitment and kept delving on her own, which is when the injury happened. If she'd been on the Path when injured, she probably would have gotten the priority for medical care due to the Path. Her view is very one sided, and she probably was offered some restrictive contracts, but the Empire's military recruitment seems pretty good based on other soldiers we've seen, with contribution points to fund tiering up, training, and gear that is hard to get at higher tiers.
adam1
2023-12-21 18:49:30 +0000 UTCBased on past descriptions of society, it doesn't sound like anyone is "independent" of the Great Powers, as much as there are people who don't really participate in society once they're high level. But the resources needed to get to that point means that they would have needed to delve/have jobs/etc and interact with one of the powers as they worked to tier up.
adam1
2023-12-21 18:41:58 +0000 UTCYou remember the deadpool moviemake. Would you agree with that statement if that was the contract. Heck what if America had the cure for cancer but you had to sign up for the military to get it. How do you think that would go. She honestly might of had no problems joining the military if it was her choice. Instead they tried forcing her and it backfired tremendously. So if what they did was in that vein then I actually they deserve a lot more blame because they should have known alot better that it would not have worked.
Bob Bryan
2023-12-21 17:08:55 +0000 UTCThe Clans motivation confuses me a bit in that the former leader made a treaty for the Empire to protect them if they were attacked in the war. It just seems that with their recent loss in power it would be much smarter to let that protection stand rather then join in on attacking the Empire atleast untill its shown the Empire to have been weakened enough to make it feasiible
Havokk
2023-12-21 17:06:02 +0000 UTCI would disagree that the manager threw her away. The Path is basically a recruitment drive for the military. You join, the Empire gives you discounts on rift slots and training, not to mention the prizes for the Pather tournament, and then once you fall off the Path you join some branch of the military to pay them back. It's not official but the further you make it and the more they have invested in you, the more you are expected to sign up. It's not exactly a secret that this is how it works. It's also not a secret that the Path is dangerous, it's literally referred to as a charnel house. Lienna was one of the top Pathers for her generation and she made it decently far at tier 15 but not exceptionally so. So a decent amount of investment on the Empire's part and not one they would simply throw away. She even mentions that the manager only left after she rejected the military contract she was offered. We don't know what she was offered but I don't see the contract being predatory. Harsh maybe, since they want to recoup their investment, but it should still likely be fair since she was an elite and they would know she should be able to get a better deal elsewhere. The fact that she apparently hasn't gotten a better deal implies that she is overvaluing herself. If that is the case then her current situation is entirely her own fault since she would have rejected the reasonable offers for not matching her own expectations.
JauPim
2023-12-21 16:56:27 +0000 UTCUnfortunately I have to agree with this.
Stormbuilder
2023-12-21 15:31:57 +0000 UTCThe problem with a counter setup tends to be even if you know the counter move, you still have to be able to execute it. Long Zhiyuan will still need to be able to overpower Matt's unlimited spells and have some way to actually hurt Liz with her infinite blood clone army. All Ascenders have something that gives them their power that others can't match, they aren't just strong combatants with strong generic skills. Waters' domain is overpowered, Light has supreme mana control of others spells, Shadow has extreme spatial control, etc. Their combat power is a function of being unmatched in that area... and simply knowing those moves isn't enough to counter them.
adam1
2023-12-21 15:20:07 +0000 UTCA veritable eternity for the contracts that offer healing. I doubt it's all that long from an immortals perspective, but she's was on the path till T15 which means she was in her 70s tops when this happened. So even a couple hundred years would be long relative to her lifespan so far. That said, not sure living hundreds/thousands of years in agony is all that much better than working for someone for a similar amount of time while not being in pain.
Alex
2023-12-21 12:56:31 +0000 UTCAnd why does this have to be a foreign power? Information brokers are very well established. And why do you think Manny would execute civilians for publicly broadcast information? The whole Empire had a chance to see that tournament.
Kelly Bryan
2023-12-21 12:53:25 +0000 UTCAt this point the Echoes chapters are far more fulfilling than the main story, which is slumping HARD. The only time i have been less interested is when they were doing endless rift creation testing.
Aegir
2023-12-21 06:48:46 +0000 UTCShe doesn't want to join the army. If she was fine with joining the army, she would already be healed. That was part of the deals she was talking about. The golden handcuffs if you will.
Bob Bryan
2023-12-21 06:45:00 +0000 UTCShes one of the higher numbered during the tier 10 pather tournament, honestly she didnt have much screen time there and i think we only see her here is because the other guy besides queen was reported to be killed in a rift in and earlier chapter
Garviel Geist
2023-12-21 04:43:09 +0000 UTCConsidering they're probably watching her, heck, the Empire might have made the offer, thinking if she made the correct not corrupt choice, they'd offer healing and to put her in the army. I don't doubt they're watching those who met their newest Ascenders in the tourney.
Melody Haren Anderson
2023-12-21 04:09:15 +0000 UTCI was more thinking about how the government is actively allowing villains to do whatever while the heros ineffectively do anything about it because they simply want the strong to live regardless of their chosen morality to fight against an outside threat. As for an outside threat that's seeking the long term destruction of their civilization, that would be the Empire. Because they all think the empire is immoral and going to destroy them.
Teatime42
2023-12-21 04:03:39 +0000 UTCHe is a different kind of threat. Frankly, if he could somehow work with !aven without them trying to kill each other, the two working together would be a much greater threat than either one alone.
Aaron Hardin
2023-12-21 03:44:14 +0000 UTCYes, until it becomes know that Matt has essentially unlimited mana (which would start an above T35 war) he would not be a perfect counter. I believe a more likely scenario is Long’s abiliy
Aaron Hardin
2023-12-21 03:39:12 +0000 UTCI was thinking closer to my hero academia, since there is not an outside force causing the long term destruction of civilization (internal maybe, but not external).
Aaron Hardin
2023-12-21 03:34:30 +0000 UTCCan you please tell me who Lienna is and where she appears in the story
JWR
2023-12-21 03:33:57 +0000 UTCI remember naked guy but don’t remember his name
Sandy
2023-12-21 03:16:55 +0000 UTCTftc!
brennon Petersen
2023-12-21 02:52:51 +0000 UTCPeople don’t get executed that easily tho. It’s mostly work sentences.
The Grey Mage
2023-12-21 02:35:59 +0000 UTCDon't really know how you could forget him He was the only guy running Minkala naked
Abriel Blauer
2023-12-21 02:18:03 +0000 UTCShe's fine with owing people money. Even said she would be able to pay them back. It's the contracts they offered there were akin to slavery that she rejected. She does not want to be owned by anyone.
Bob Bryan
2023-12-21 02:17:28 +0000 UTCEmpire cointel is going to execute her if they get their hands on her. Given how easily people get executed in the Empire, someone actively committing espionage isn't gonna get to keep their head.
Violet
2023-12-21 02:03:46 +0000 UTCI mean... On the one hand, as someone who has to live with constant pain (sadly, it's not a matter of not being able to afford a fix - they just can't fix what's wrong with me), I can confirm that it does totally change the way you perceive the world. On the other, I'm still perfectly able to recognize very bad ideas that will almost certainly result in my untimely death.
Violet
2023-12-21 02:02:32 +0000 UTCi have grown to truly appreciate these chapters; callbacks to characters that flesh them out as a person, or remind you of their existence. thanks
xuv
2023-12-21 01:59:43 +0000 UTCLienne is an interesting perspective, I think being in constant pain has colored her state of mind and I hope she gets to recover. Also, everyone seems to jump to the conclusion that the person paying her is from another Great Power, why cant it just be an information broker for the Empire? She is under no legal binding to keep her observations secret and to me this just highlights why they bothered with the masks
Kelly Bryan
2023-12-21 01:54:22 +0000 UTCI keep hoping that he'll show up as an Echo...
Shmigit
2023-12-21 01:53:47 +0000 UTCAll plans definitely don’t fall before power lol. Also, he’s almost certainly on par with Maven, if not stronger. So I really doubt he’s dead.
The Grey Mage
2023-12-21 01:43:44 +0000 UTCWhile Lienna does seem like a somewhat unreliable narrator, I do hope things turnout well for her. Maybe the Empire’s counter intelligence will get ahold of her and straighten her out.
The Grey Mage
2023-12-21 01:41:01 +0000 UTCClaude was fun. He was no Han De, but still fun
wanderer117
2023-12-21 01:33:08 +0000 UTCActually, it seems like he's being raised as an "anti-ascender". He's not an ascender, those are people who take overwhelming power and break your enemies in every situation. Instead, he's a character who can eventually kill specific people who are vastly more powerful than him, at the expense of time and guile. He's like a phalanx of spears to a calvary, perfect at defending against one thing.
Nathan Sto
2023-12-21 01:05:49 +0000 UTCI disagree on that. We don't know exactly why she went into that Rift. Alot of this is on the manager if they chose that Rift. If they trusted their manager and then were thrown away now that they were no longer useful, that would very easily build resentment. Why shouldn't she only look out for herself if everyone else is going to betray her. There is alot of that to. At least that would be her mindset. Honestly she would have been a perfect test case for Melissa
Bob Bryan
2023-12-21 00:42:49 +0000 UTCYeah. Torture & pain are well known to drive individuals to do or say anything for the pain to stop. I hope her character gets healed and has a mini redemption arc Mind you, if it was that bad she’d just take the deal and get healed by joining the army or something
Tommy
2023-12-21 00:38:14 +0000 UTCLol doubt they’d bother showing us his perspective only for him to already be dead from a previous chapter! He will get a beat down eventually
Tommy
2023-12-21 00:36:37 +0000 UTC@Darius No, I'm not. I feel similarly to you in regards to how fights with Ascenders are supposed to go. But at this point it's pretty clear that we're supposed to see fights like the ones against Soddus & Girang and Maven as "victories" because of extenuating circumstances. MLA aren't going to be on the level of DW and it seems we're supposed to just accept that and move on. Just like with Maven, Long Zhiyuan isn't going anywhere soon, so every encounter is going to end with them living somehow, unfortunately.
Matt H
2023-12-21 00:35:53 +0000 UTCAt least 100 of poisonings he was serving poisoned wine dressed as a waiter wearing a fake moustache
Dominic Harney
2023-12-21 00:27:55 +0000 UTCIt was written very vaguely. Could be either way.
MikeL
2023-12-21 00:25:20 +0000 UTCId like to see a echo of Simeon, the dual stars guy who matt sold mana to on the training world
Scott Lyon
2023-12-21 00:24:20 +0000 UTCHow much could she really know? Nothing important. I hope it’s the Empire helping her out on the sly.
MikeL
2023-12-21 00:23:52 +0000 UTCShe was pause in the t10 tournament, she could revert her body back to a previous save state.
Scott Lyon
2023-12-21 00:22:53 +0000 UTCChapter 5 side story in minkalla. Greatest tragedy of the series. I am still devastated and demand a retcon.
Dominic Harney
2023-12-21 00:22:31 +0000 UTCWe've seen people waiting for high tier healing before, and they've generally agreed to service with the Empire for that healing. Healing for citizens is free except for delvers, with the assumption being that taking risks to advance requires payment so as not to burden the system. But high tier damage is costly to heal, even if a healer is available. The only thing I expect is that she might trip an alert to get Melinda to heal her for the experience of fighting a Talent-induced injury issue.
adam1
2023-12-21 00:08:18 +0000 UTCWas that the tier 10 tournament?
Quixotic
2023-12-21 00:07:54 +0000 UTCDid I mention anyone over tier 35 I'm confused why you brought that up also it would be unfeasible to get everyone because there's always gonna be someone who slips through the cracks
Anime Problem
2023-12-21 00:07:42 +0000 UTCwhich chapter?
Quixotic
2023-12-21 00:05:56 +0000 UTCDid he? I don't remember that.
adam1
2023-12-21 00:05:14 +0000 UTCEh, I think it’s less that she’s a bad person and more that she’s in so much pain she’s making stupid decisions. Sure, I don’t think she’s a *good* person, but I don’t think she’s a bad person either.
CringeWorthyStudios
2023-12-21 00:03:06 +0000 UTCLong Zhiyuan I originally liked his character but now he's the same but also changed and you see what he made himself he is not on par with people that finish their tier 25 programs he knew he could not overcome it so he planned away to get similar power but ultimately what he's become is not power but a planner and all plans fall before power so yeah I also hope he was there for the ambush and he died. Just as a side note
hachetnif
2023-12-20 23:59:45 +0000 UTCShe refused to join the Army after falling off the path, which was technically a violation of the contract she had as a Pather. She embezzled money to pay for her potions until she was fired. She has repeatedly gotten offers for healing, just requiring her to join the guilds thay would provide it for a certain number of years, but she refuses. She is the kind of person that wants everything and goves nothing.
Tristan R Mitchell
2023-12-20 23:59:36 +0000 UTCThe Empire's advantage is the restriction of resources and the manager system. It produces stronger ascenders.
Tristan R Mitchell
2023-12-20 23:56:32 +0000 UTCIt might just be some empire nobles. Neither us nor her knows who is buying her knowledge. But you are right that it suggests a lack of loyalty. But to be fair, the empire hasn’t done much to earn it. Reaching Tier 15 on the path should have been more than enough for the empire to offer a plan with a payback over a few hundred years. Not the indefinite plans she’s referring.
Chymor
2023-12-20 23:50:10 +0000 UTCI think she was the one from their tournament that could revert herself back through time by a bit, and to beat her they had to contain her past that time limit
CursedValheru
2023-12-20 23:39:33 +0000 UTCDon't pity Lienna. Her story is told from her perspective and her perspective is clearly very warped. Reading between the lines, it's clear that she stole from the hospital finances and got fired for it. But she believes that she did nothing wrong and blames the hospital. Apply that same logic to the rest of her complaints and her section reads very differently.
JauPim
2023-12-20 23:23:50 +0000 UTCHer personality is definitely warping her perspective. If you pay attention she stole from the hospital's finances, got fired and then blamed the hospital. No remorse, no reflection. Just attempts to justify herself as being right.
JauPim
2023-12-20 23:20:12 +0000 UTCRe-read her section, bearing in mind that it is told from her perspective. Especially this section - "From there, she’d gotten an AI job. It was nothing special, just data-pushing and correspondence, monitoring some low-level finance for the hospital. Things she could do from her bed, from her chair. But they didn’t pay enough, not enough to pay for her potions, but that wasn’t her fault. If they’d just give her the healing she needed, then she wouldn’t have needed the pain potions to begin with. They didn’t see it that way, of course, and they’d acted so magnanimous when they fired her, acting like they were doing her such a favor by cutting off her sanity lifeline." It sounds like she stole from the hospital's finances and then blamed the hospital for firing her. I expect that the other things she complains about are similar, her expecting people to just give her things without her paying any of the cost.
JauPim
2023-12-20 23:12:38 +0000 UTCEh I don’t know about that like he’s a “counter” only if his data about Matt and the rest is still relevant, it’s almost certainly not unless he somehow guessed Matt’s exponential growth and factors that into his model somehow, and without that he’s talented sure but only with set up he’ll be a good recurring antagonist but imo not even close to a sure fire winner whenever he shows up.
Kain
2023-12-20 23:09:33 +0000 UTCHe died.
Allen
2023-12-20 23:07:16 +0000 UTCYeah, she wants someone to heal her but doesn't want to pay the cost of the healing. From the sound of it, that sort of healing is relatively expensive so, especially with the war on, the people providing it want to focus on their own people first. Anyone else needs to pay upfront. Lienna wants to be healed and pay it back over time, which seems to be the deal offered to members of the organisations that will be able to provide that level of healing. However, she refuses to join any of the organisations and then blames them for not compromising. It's also worth noting that it's told from her perspective and people are seldom self-aware enough to view themselves as being in the wrong. Take this section - "From there, she’d gotten an AI job. It was nothing special, just data-pushing and correspondence, monitoring some low-level finance for the hospital. Things she could do from her bed, from her chair. But they didn’t pay enough, not enough to pay for her potions, but that wasn’t her fault. If they’d just give her the healing she needed, then she wouldn’t have needed the pain potions to begin with. They didn’t see it that way, of course, and they’d acted so magnanimous when they fired her, acting like they were doing her such a favor by cutting off her sanity lifeline." It sounds like she was fired for stealing money from the finances she oversaw but she blames the hospital and doesn't see it as her fault. She is one of those people who always push the blame for their mistakes and bad luck onto others.
JauPim
2023-12-20 23:04:29 +0000 UTCI get the sense that she is an unreliable narrator. Constant pain twists people. That said, I would be surprised if she wasn't under surveillance of some kind. Then again, how many people fall off the path every year? Can we really expect no one to fall through the cracks?
Phil
2023-12-20 23:01:56 +0000 UTCIt's really interesting to see the Guilds be a variant path that the Sects might have taken. It's struck me as hard to shoehorn heroic/villainous behavior into cultivation settings because of the lack of incentive to cultivators to engage in either petty crime or fighting villains over furthering their cultivation. Socially gamifying that behavior in order to keep your proto-Sects from becoming the kind of tyrants that the Sects became is an interesting justification.
Violet
2023-12-20 23:01:09 +0000 UTCI really wonder why Pause is not given more resources. Maybe her perspective is very skewed. But a T15 who was able to delve +4 Tiers and a Top 5 talent in her generation should be able to secure even expensive healing without going into a slave contract
da Finnci
2023-12-20 22:55:00 +0000 UTCGiven how Lienna / Pause seems to be selling her knowledge to another Great Power, there is no way The Empire will let Melinda anywhere near her.
Abriel Blauer
2023-12-20 22:52:09 +0000 UTCBlind man during the Minkala run He was a main / recuring character in the Minkala side stories
Abriel Blauer
2023-12-20 22:50:34 +0000 UTCIt also serves to blunt the more nefarious crimes. If you can legitimately be a Villain as long as you don't cross certain lines, that would certainly make those more extreme crimes less likely to happen.
Phil
2023-12-20 22:50:28 +0000 UTCyou're confusing "winning" with "not losing", if they were winning Maven would be dead instead of Team Zero only having just narrowly escaped a trap. Frankly if MLA doesn't send that insufferable asshole Long Zhiyuan packing i'm gonna be cross with Mantis, perfect counter my ass.
Darius Sanguna
2023-12-20 22:47:53 +0000 UTCVery interesting chapter. The only person I don't really remember is Lienna. She mentioned meeting the group once during the planet phase of the pather tournament. Was there more about her? I don't remember all that much about that section of the story. Though I'll be refreshed when the audiobook comes out I supposed. I'm surprised about how excited I am to see more of Long Zhiyuan in the future. Maybe because there wasn't a definitive end to the Minkalla confrontation? He is also just an interesting character, his talent especially. He clearly remembers Matt at the very least. Makes sense considering how important Minkalla was to Long Zhiyuan. I like the idea that the Guilds legitimize Villains as well as Heroes. I imagine Terrorists and Vigilantes are the counterpoint to Villains and Heroes. One side representing good and evil order, and the other chaotic good and evil. True neutral would be the majority of the population, or just citizens. Would be an interesting society to explore in story form some time.
Phil
2023-12-20 22:44:45 +0000 UTCI think Lienna could be an excellent test for Melinda's powers. They could help each other if someone could get them into contact with each other. Anyway, nice chapter as always
Mashiara
2023-12-20 22:44:32 +0000 UTCI don’t remember this Claude dude
Sandy
2023-12-20 22:44:12 +0000 UTCIts not that no one wants to help her Its more like she doesn't want to owe anything for the treatment Also, do not forget that regular healer cannot help her She need a high Tier healer to overpower her Talent
Abriel Blauer
2023-12-20 22:34:08 +0000 UTCThe Lienna interlude doesn’t really make sense. Is the Empire on a total war footing? No, it isn’t. That doesn’t even really make sense the way the economy is managed. She can’t afford treatment? No one will volunteer to help a talented (relatively) young woman trapped in interminable torment? I don’t buy it, it doesn’t check out.
Yshua
2023-12-20 22:25:41 +0000 UTCWhatever happened to Han De?
Yshua
2023-12-20 22:21:20 +0000 UTCI am still hoping to see the POV from the Junipers The previous noble family ruling over Lily and responsible for the multiple rift break.
Abriel Blauer
2023-12-20 22:17:35 +0000 UTCHe's been setup to essentially be the perfect counter to MLA (and L&S, I suppose). Whenever he shows up in the story it'll only be once he has perfect counters prepared for them given their current abilities. I fully expect that any confrontations between him and MLA will be at best draws for MLA or, more likely, retreats for a LONG time. MLA are on a winning streak and haven't lost in a while? Bring in Long Zhiyuan!
Matt H
2023-12-20 22:15:18 +0000 UTCSeems like Villains are officially recognized criminals. They serve the purpose of being a whetstone for Heroes while also enabling people with "darker" tendencies to do what they want to do and get better and stronger as well. I expect the Guilds frequently recruits many spies, assassins, special forces, etc. from the Villains.
Matt H
2023-12-20 22:06:15 +0000 UTCI want to see the perspective of their teammates from the pather war. Annie Conner and Emily.
Dallin S
2023-12-20 22:03:21 +0000 UTCHonestly can't blame lienna, rewind, empire did her dirty. Like they could have at least paid for the healer to help fix her even if she still would have fallen off the path. That will be a very costly mistake for them in the future.
Bob Bryan
2023-12-20 21:52:19 +0000 UTCHis talent is good for a induvidual. But remember what Acenders are. They are the trumpcards that are suposed to fight against people that have speceficaly trained to fight them. I can see that a great power that try to counter any Acender will create simular kinds of dumies for their strike force to fight against.
Markus
2023-12-20 21:50:52 +0000 UTCIirc all of the independents over tier 35 are forced to swear binding oaths not to fuck shit up
austin kutz
2023-12-20 21:45:02 +0000 UTCWhat would you say is the advantage of the Empire’s? Covert operation? That they are already used to missions.
Ahppy
2023-12-20 21:25:04 +0000 UTCOh i absolutely see that part as well. The system is clearly designed to incentivize her to join up and give back on the investment the empire made with her. However, her talent leaving her crippled and in horrible agony still sucks.
Thomas Brusilovsky
2023-12-20 21:21:51 +0000 UTCEmpire: Main target of the war The Guilds: Allies of the Empire The Sects: Main opponent of the Empire The Republic: Main opponent of the Empire The Federation: Main opponent of the Empire + Lots of hatred The Corporations: Neutral, but previous 3 Power seems to have hired all their mercenaries. The Monster Collective: Neutral and seems to want to keep it that way The Clans: Neutral, but some leaders seems to want to join the attack on The Empire.
Abriel Blauer
2023-12-20 21:20:45 +0000 UTCI feel a little different about Lienna, I think she’s kind of delusional? She joined the path which is meant to produce the strongest assets for the Empires army. The Path is highly sponsored by the empire already, prizes for tournaments, tier milestones, mini wars, management teams - it’s a giant investment with the explicit goal of strengthening the empires military. She must have known that. Still, after she took all these investments and fell off the path she decided not to join the army. I’m not 100% sure if she got the offer but the text strongly suggests that (her management only left after she didn’t join).Instead she seems to think that even though she plans to give nothing back she still deserves more than the normal rift delver? (Namely a high tiered Healer) Don’t get me wrong- no one deserves to be in constant pain but there seem to be to few healers for to many people so, what makes her more deserving than the other patients with her?
Jana
2023-12-20 21:20:03 +0000 UTCWe were told in the very first book that "The Path" is a grind house and that almost all will fall short on be that in failing to keep up with the curve or taking one final risk that ends it for them. We have been following MLA on this journey and they are the rare incredible few that somehow against all odds and common sense manage to complete it, they are truly the elite of the elite of the elite. and looking at those who were so promising and then fell short only highlights that MLA are stronger than we as an audience often give them credit for.
Havokk
2023-12-20 21:14:52 +0000 UTCI feel like it would be interesting to see a character who's independent of the Great Powers take on the Ascension Maybe we could get a cocky Sun Wukong "Throughout the heavans and the earth i alone am the honored one" like figure who wants to fight them to test their mettle
Anime Problem
2023-12-20 21:13:08 +0000 UTCQueens not done yet
Anime Problem
2023-12-20 21:10:34 +0000 UTCBack to the Tier 10 tournament. Adam, Queen, Quill, Torch and Pause were the Top 5 of the Solo part of the tournament. Adam disappeared in a Rift. Queen is on the verge of failing due to continuous healing cooldown Pause is bedridden following a freak Rift Accident Quill and Torch completed the Path. Seeing how the others elites failed and fell of the Path just show us how hard completing the Path really is, and hammer once more how deadly trying really is. Adam and Pause were truly Elite, but one died (apparently) and the other is worst than dead. Queen, who was close in Talent and Potential to Quill and Torch is also falling short.
Abriel Blauer
2023-12-20 21:08:30 +0000 UTCThe path doesn't force you into the military though. Manny wants willing soldiers. You're only required to join the military if you finish the path. Everyone else can do what they want. (Though many feel indebted to the empire and decide to pay back the support they received all on their own. Always better to make people want to do sth rather than force it)
Alex
2023-12-20 21:04:34 +0000 UTCI think I need a refresher on which powers side with whom, and are in this war
Ryan Romano
2023-12-20 21:03:08 +0000 UTCYeah. She probably got contract that would require her to work for a pretty long time, but she immortal. If there's anything she's got, it's time. But she would rather be completely independent, no kong term contracts. She wants freedom. That is her choice, but she should also accept the consequences of that choice. Its not like the risks of delving are a secret.
Alex
2023-12-20 21:02:40 +0000 UTCI wonder how many Pathers from the tournament feel the same way about Matt and Liz competing in both their masked and unmasked personas. and Id still love to see the reaction from the Corporations guy from Minkalla as he tries to figure a way to make any deals he can with MLA
Havokk
2023-12-20 21:00:58 +0000 UTCThe feel of it was that the military wanting her to serve at all was a slave offer from her point of view. Never mind that she voluntarily signed up for military recruitment (The Path)
SunStar
2023-12-20 21:00:41 +0000 UTCI agree to a degree. I would imagine that all great powers have similar sorts of programs. Add to that while he would be a wrecking ball at the lower levels, the normal mix of infighting, scale of effectiveness for planning on such a large battle field, and the inability to effect the higher tiers of battle will mean he will be more background than main villain. One of my favourite scans from a manga was that the enemy could predict everything, but got knower in one punch as he could not see away of not getting a haymaker to the chin as soon ad the bell rung.
Dominic Harney
2023-12-20 21:00:16 +0000 UTCThe first point is, based of what was said, no normal healer can help her. She seems to be needing a high level healer who could overpower her Talent. Such healer are unlikely to be independents, either working for the Empire, a high tier guild or a noble. So, yes, hiring the service of such an healer is probably complicated and pricy. Given the fact that her accident happened while on the Path, I found it strange that no solution was given to her. The fact that her trainer just dumped her, like she said, also sounds weird. I am more inclined to believe that her personality seems to have warped her perception. While she was on the Path, it would have been impossible for her to get a "slave" offer for healing. Also, going back to the Pather's war, it was always said that army / military contract were fair. While I believe there is a lot of people trying to abuse the situation and have her sign up the next several 10 thousands years of her life, I am also sure she got fair offer from others. I am pretty certain her manager must have tried to found a good option for her. Like for Matt and the mana concentration formation, she must have received an offer for healing with an option to pay back after the Path. I think this is more a situation where her Pride, Ego and Personality prevented her from differencing the honest help people were trying to gave her from the abuser.
Abriel Blauer
2023-12-20 20:58:14 +0000 UTCAgreed Im pretty sure she is the Pather "Pause" who in the tournament simply couldn't be killed as all wounds were reversed. Sad to see her go the informant route but her story makes her reasoning understandable
Havokk
2023-12-20 20:52:29 +0000 UTCA bit of a dark chapter. Not sure I care about others than LZ, who will have a reckoning in future with our MCs.
Bender
2023-12-20 20:50:39 +0000 UTCWhile mostly true, they do lots of missions and stuff, and most individuals/ parties can constantly delve anyway, so most of their non rift time is practicing against people I would assume.
Andrew Glass
2023-12-20 20:48:47 +0000 UTCSurprising there aren’t more smaller tournaments required. I know there are optional ones that Anne’s team did.
MikeL
2023-12-20 20:48:10 +0000 UTCHot damn I feel awful for that poor girl at the start. I can definitely see why she’s hella bitter.
Thomas Brusilovsky
2023-12-20 20:46:59 +0000 UTCHis rivalry with Light would be interesting. Two schemers. I feel that his worst opponent would be Liz with her functional immortality and bloodline tree.
sambee
2023-12-20 20:44:27 +0000 UTCWith every soldier he cuts down, he would have a flashback to the convoluted plan he pulled off to have them ingest the poison.
RedeyeA
2023-12-20 20:43:41 +0000 UTCI'm pretty sure Lienna is the pather who could heal herself by reversing time for herself in MLA's tournament. She had a rivalry with the illusion guy who disappeared in a rift.
2023-12-20 20:43:35 +0000 UTCShe was Pause / Rewind in the Tier 10 tournament with Matt and Liz. With Adam and Suzanne (Queen) they were the Top 5 Solo if I remember correctly
Abriel Blauer
2023-12-20 20:41:40 +0000 UTCIt would be really funny if when he is T31, Blood Hands takes out a T35 army by poisoning each of them individually the night before and having 1000 years of subjective experience fighting against all of them.
RedeyeA
2023-12-20 20:40:47 +0000 UTCPause/Rewind
C_Mantis
2023-12-20 20:38:56 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter!! And who is Lienna??
Nathan
2023-12-20 20:38:12 +0000 UTCNo. Queen’s name is Susanne
Charlie Staner
2023-12-20 20:35:50 +0000 UTCI was just recently thinking that the Story lacks some Villains on MLAs Tierrange as Maven is the only standout and we will need enemies for 2 wars. I still hope that the monster collective can be bribed to join the empire’s side which leaves us with Bloodhand (that one’s gonna be annoying) and Lienna (more of a spyhunt here).
Jana
2023-12-20 20:34:23 +0000 UTCClaude has a point though, the path doesn't really train you all that well for fighting people which is 90% of what they're supposed to do once they finish and join the army. Stuff like the Pather war only rarely happens. They do get occasional missions, but not all that often. The sects take the learning to fight people part a bit too far, forcing them into death matched every two tiers that only end after a minimum of 50% of young masters have been killed. Not sure how good the guilds stuff is. All Path equivalents have their upsides and downsides.
Alex
2023-12-20 20:32:32 +0000 UTCLong Zhiyuan is going to find out that even the best laid plans don't mean anything when countered with overwhelming force.
Darius Sanguna
2023-12-20 20:30:51 +0000 UTCThat is correct she is Pause/Rewind
C_Mantis
2023-12-20 20:30:00 +0000 UTCTftc!
James Faulkner
2023-12-20 20:29:10 +0000 UTCNo queen is Susanne who is in early tier 20s still fighting to finish the path.
Spellmonger
2023-12-20 20:29:10 +0000 UTCI wonder if Lienna is under surveillance. It’s a bit odd that she was so suddenly dropped. She did make it to tier 16 ish. What about all her prizes, and her manager just disappearing? Either she has managed to piss everyone off, she is clueless to the help she is being offered, or it’s a test of character that she is failing.
Dominic Harney
2023-12-20 20:28:13 +0000 UTCI was thinking Pause/Rewind.
MikeL
2023-12-20 20:28:00 +0000 UTCMy goodness. Long Zhiyuan is actually horrifying, that his talents and I assume Revelations can be exploited even more where he is at. He is going to be a fun opponent later, looking forward to it.
Xepen
2023-12-20 20:26:31 +0000 UTCIs Lienna Queen?
mitchell kaiser
2023-12-20 20:21:39 +0000 UTCLong Zhiyuan. Unlimited experience and planning against unlimited mana. The only good thing about it is that it will take Long Zhiyuan decades if not a century to reach tier 25 and be ready for the same battlefields... More likely he will be put into the lower tier battlefields and absolutely wreak the war effort there.
Fake Name
2023-12-20 20:20:39 +0000 UTCThanks a bunch! ʕ•ᴥ•ʔゞ゛
Sezra_
2023-12-20 20:20:39 +0000 UTCGoing to have to go back and find scenes with Lienna, I don't remember her 😆
Spellmonger
2023-12-20 20:20:22 +0000 UTCOof. Poor girl. She's bitter, and unknowingly a traitor, but I can hardly blame her. And jeez the former Young Master. So he's catching up huh? A mountain similar to Folded Reflections that synergizes with his Talent to that extent. What a lucky break for him. Not an official Ascender, but actually approaching that level right now. The Guilds confuses me even more now. How does the Villain system work?
SCDarkSoul
2023-12-20 20:19:34 +0000 UTCLiving in a society that runs Hero's and Villains like that feels too much like living in Worm. Sounds painful. XD
Teatime42
2023-12-20 20:14:28 +0000 UTCFree healing only applies to regular injuries and illnesses, even in the empire. Delving is at your own risk. (I am wondering now what exactly the rules are, what about training accidents? Crafting accidents? Are they covered for free?) That said, there should be more reasonable ways to get a loan for healing and pay back later. The empire could make rules about it. She has a point, she is immortal, predatory contracts suck. Like the ones that Matt got when he first got his talent. The ones Miles warned him about not taking. Then again, how bad really are the contracts. Working for someone for a couple hundred years may be worth it. Really depends on how bad they are. She may be a bit biased and see something that's merely not great as something terrible. That said, the empire healers are working a lot. It may not just be malice keeping them from prioritizing. They may simply not have enough high tier healers for everyone. If some healer came and healed her, that may mean somebody else wouldn't get healing and on a empire wide scale nothing would've changed. She is hateful. She does realize that a lot of ascenders come from nowhere? Matt does. So do Aiden and Zack. Allies parents were immortal but they were still nobodies. Lila is a dragon, that doesn't count :)
Alex
2023-12-20 20:05:44 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter!
Kuurth
2023-12-20 20:00:12 +0000 UTC