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Unfinished Business Part 40: Epilogue

Loose ends.


Again, posting early because I'm leaving today to go sign pre-orders. Next week I'll introduce the new story!

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So I wanted to wait until I read through the entire novel before posting a comment, and all I can say is that you have really succeeded in writing a new book that kept my interest without relying on it being set in the Forester Universe. And this is a really fascinating fictional world I want to live in (in the same way I’d like to live in Middle Earth or Supernatural). In all honesty, this is what Netflix’s β€œBright” SHOULD have been; have a solid story with well-written characters who aren’t created solely for the themes. And while this novel does make allusions to some racism IRL, with the β€˜extras’ facing various forms of discrimination, the focus is more on Jae and his personal problems. The plot itself is so well-compacted that I’m hoping you could make a sequel or a spin-off novel. Hell, why not do what you did with Waterways and make a Wolftown Universe? The possibilities are endless! :) Either way, I’m really glad I read this, Mr. Gold.

Domus Vocis

Whoops, no, next week is the sex scene, but I can also start talking about the new story. :)

Kyell Gold


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