Fallout sunburst 18_01
Added 2025-04-03 13:47:23 +0000 UTC
The sound work has not been done yet.
Comments
It's great. Fantastic and I loved every moment of it. But I think 'probing attack' is a better term than guerilla attack.
TrueBlob
2025-04-05 18:11:35 +0000 UTCFantastic work on this moment of downtime, i like that even the Paladins dont have a moment to rest and are stuck inside their power armor incase of an emergency. Just some minor grammatical fixes to tighten up the dialogue. At 1:14 "Half of it Remains" might come off as too stiff, you can go for either "Half remaining" or "Got half left" depending of if you want to be more serious or casual for the grunts. At 1:40: "They aims to deplete our ammo," is unfortunately incorrect, it should either be "They aim to" or "Their aim is to" very minor error, totally get it if it was just a slip up At: 1:52: "... snipers to counter the enemy snipers positioned along" You can ditch the 'The' for something smoother, "We've deployed a few of our own snipers to counter enemy snipers along the surrounding ridges" or you can say "We've deployed a few counter snipers to keep an eye on the surrounding ridges." Keep up the amazing work Sodaz looking forward to the rest of it!
Tojo
2025-04-05 04:35:14 +0000 UTCNCR은 등장할 때마다 떼로 죽어나가면서도 보급은 괜찮아 보이는데 BoS는 이제 에너지 무기는 하나도 보이지 않고 노획한 것으로 보이는 제식소총과 바민트 라이플을 쓰고 있네요. NCR의 전술은 희생을 무릅쓰고 반복적인 공격을 가해서 BoS를 피곤하게 하고 물자를 바닥나게 한 다음, 소규모 공격조차 막아내지 못하게 되면 그때 총공격을 가하는 것일까요? 맥나마라가 어느 시점에 철수를 결정할지 궁금하네요
본선 구
2025-04-04 00:38:52 +0000 UTCThis must be that “waves upon waves until we ran out of ammunition” detail Hardin was going off on….
Yukinu
2025-04-03 23:23:01 +0000 UTCThis is the beginning of the end it seems. I wonder how the final push will look like. Super excited to see that!
Hoang Vu
2025-04-03 16:20:46 +0000 UTC
