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INTEMPERANCE IX - Chapter 20, Compound Interest

Continuing to move along at my overdrive pace. Here's the next phase of the tale. Everything gets weird if you find yourself in the Kingsley orbit, but it's also beneficial. As always, let me know how I'm doing.

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I'd like to see you join guitar sing time with the crow serenade.

A J Kidd

I REALLY like the Ramirez family. They remind me of a Columbian family that moved into my 100% white, upper middle class neighborhood back in 1970 in Queens Village, NYC, NY I got to be really good friends with Jimmy (though he was gay and died of AIDS early in the epidemic), and I ended up dating his sister for a long while with a happier ending than Jake's and Michelle's . . . though not as nice as I'm hoping Owen and Tif will have. I also introduced Jimmy and Diana to black-capped chickadees. They're small, brazen little birds that have NO compunction about landing on your hand to take sunflower seeds!

Lawrence David Thompson

They are turning into Kingsley orbitals. Not a bad thing to be.

Al Steiner

Thank you! It takes a minute to catch it.

Al Steiner

Most excellent chapter. Jose and his family are really engaging. Thanks, Al!

Gregory Stewart

“This closet has no door.” “Sean again. He’s gay, remember?” Nerdly shot him a look. “I don’t understand the reference,” he said. “Never mind,” Jake said with a grin. THAT, was good one Al!

Russ Wideman


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