INTEMPERANCE IX - Chapter 14, The Book of Promiscuous
Added 2025-05-16 22:57:15 +0000 UTCAnother chapter that poured out of me. This one was strange. I started out writing the first scene, which is the immediate aftermath of the Judge Olson discovery, and it just kept going. I have learned to follow such impulses and I did so here. I really like this chapter and it ends with a cool plot twist. Let me know what you think, like always. I had a lot of fun writing this one as I haven't dipped into Nerdly's head recently and it's still a cool place.
Comments
Thank you for a great chapter! Hysterical. I was reading the previous one on the plane the other day and kept disturbing my neighbors because I was laughing so hard! This one was just as much fun. One small technical point: remember, back in the day, the white pages were for personal addresses and yellow pages were for businesses.
Bob Noone
2025-05-20 03:42:44 +0000 UTCI enjoyed the chapter, thanks. I think you should up Nerdy's geek creds. In 2004 a high tech small business that couldn't get cable Internet (not widely available then) would have a T1 or T3 line. Nerdly is a rich geek, give him a T3. That would really impress his aspiring nerd neighbor.
Hayden
2025-05-19 14:09:33 +0000 UTCwell that was fun!! .....shades of Nottingham drive
Russ Wideman
2025-05-18 04:03:57 +0000 UTCBest chapter ever!
Bob Galinsky
2025-05-18 02:55:46 +0000 UTC
