INTEMPERANCE VIII - Chapter 8, Only the Beginning
Added 2024-05-17 03:16:43 +0000 UTCThe next chapter moves things down the road a bit. C's pregnancy is getting more advanced and other characters are starting to come into their own. As always, let me know what you think. Remember, your comments help me shape the narrative. I might not always follow them, but I'm always happy to read them.
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There was no rehearsal described. The wedding took place at Kingsley Manor with Jake footing the bill.
Al Steiner
2024-08-26 22:15:01 +0000 UTCHave I missed the wedding of Massa and Meghan? I read about the rehearsal but cannot find the actual wedding
Rex Waygood
2024-08-26 17:16:26 +0000 UTCNotes: If I tell you this, it had to remain extremely confidential. had->has A slightly disappointed nod, but mixed with acquiesce. acquiesce->acquiescence, and maybe make it a bit clearer it's Jake doing this? "He gave..." or something? your mama is going to want to go to services with you ever Sunday she’s here. ever->every Four more will be discretely roaming around discretely->discreetly
mdapkins
2024-05-20 16:19:28 +0000 UTCSounds like there will be some fun chapters around the birth, looking forward to them.
mdapkins
2024-05-20 16:19:03 +0000 UTCAny news on the vineyard project? I’m asking it because I’m currently (2pm in Europe) enjoying a Californian Zinfandel. What grapes does KVA grow? Have they succeeded in hiring a competent viticulturist? Probable typo on p18: ““I’m assuming were talking about right after the baby is born,” Celia said.” Were->we’re
Alle Joeng
2024-05-19 12:27:21 +0000 UTC
