Chapter 1: Pages 25-32 (Boar on the loose!)
Added 2024-01-30 04:24:28 +0000 UTCPhew, and I thought Chapters 5 and 6 wore me out with crowds, this is ridiculous, lol. You can see I stopped trying as hard as time went on, XD. But they look good!
So much action! So you see, none of this should be recognizable to any of you since this is an entirely new 2nd act. But you might catch that some of the beats are similar to the old version of the 2nd act.
I think Morales' appearance here compared to the original version is stronger since he appears already in the first act, compared to him kinda showing up out of nowhere in the original version.
The Big Boar here can be compared to the Yak's role in the original, but the beats are entirely different. His name is Randal btw, he's pretty tough. I really like his design! Too bad I don't have much use for him anymore after this, lol. just like the yak.
Also Bikes are hard to draw, holy cow, I learned a lot drawing these panels. A lot of challenges.
Anyway, enjoy! Should be getting another update this week since the next scene is much shorter.
Comments
Poor Ray. He wanted to make a good impression, but he ended up becoming a rescue, lol. Love how Ray gets annoyed at Ally and Liz having a crush on Morales. It's nice to see Khali and Natasha again. And it feels great to finally meet Gwen.
FurFist
2024-01-30 22:34:16 +0000 UTCYeah! That's a good way to describe Gwen. She's the more high spirited officer of the trio.
Scotty
2024-01-30 14:50:40 +0000 UTCI like Gwen (Guinevere). She strikes me as having a bit of a playful personality.
Daniel Frederick
2024-01-30 13:38:31 +0000 UTCLet's gooooo
Ermwhat
2024-01-30 05:43:10 +0000 UTCprobably the hardest decision for me to make, lol. But with the new changes, it had to go.
Scotty
2024-01-30 05:20:17 +0000 UTCBruh decided to make his own doorway. Also Morales is too good, too perfect. I suspect him to not be the man he wants everyone to think he is. Rip to the butt on fire joke 🙏
Gally
2024-01-30 04:32:02 +0000 UTC
