Chapter 1: Pages 22-24 (Bad deal)
Added 2024-01-08 16:08:54 +0000 UTCDon't mind me while I resuse old drawings for posts and TV stuff LOL! Still slow at delivering these to you but at least this is a much shorter scene. This scene is mostly similar to the original version but I swapped out Liev for Amber and Ruby, unnamed in this scene, for the brevity of the chapter. So at this point, they just seem like tough lackeys for a mysterious boss we've yet to meet. This scene is also much simpler in general. Only 3 pages compared to the original 6. Just gets straight to the point. I also wanted an excuse to add Amber and Ruby finally and this scene was a perfect chance.
The next update will be when things stop getting familiar to old readers. The 2nd act is almost entirely different than the original. Can't wait to share it!
Comments
Hey I know that skunk on the poster XD
EunosMiata
2024-03-22 03:11:42 +0000 UTCAt this point, Amber and Ruby just believe Halberd is making things up to defend his loss. Neo-Mutants are very rare. They believe they exist but they don't believe Halberd encountered one.
Scotty
2024-01-09 04:43:23 +0000 UTCAlso nobody seems to bat an eye at the whole mutant thing. Maybe it's been revised so they aren't a top secret government conspiracy? Liev previously seemed to take Rays existence pretty personally
Gally
2024-01-09 04:36:29 +0000 UTCEvery time I make last minute edits, I make an incredible typos LOL!
Scotty
2024-01-08 18:07:03 +0000 UTCPage one, panel 3: Should be "taken out" not "taking out". Isn't it wonderful how terrible people just can't seem to get along?
Billblok
2024-01-08 16:58:54 +0000 UTCDamn. Happy to see them in action. Ruby and Amber move fast. The way Ruby manhandles Halberd while Amber makes it clear that she could kill Boony and Tang shows off their power.
FurFist
2024-01-08 16:29:14 +0000 UTCTypo's fixed lmao. And Yeah, Amber and Ruby high tier in the power scaling department at this point of the story. Stronger than Ray and Summer even.
Scotty
2024-01-08 16:16:27 +0000 UTCMormons? https://i.gyazo.com/1801bf786f73da4d9306a18aba5e8026.png But those two are stronger than anticipated
Gally
2024-01-08 16:12:29 +0000 UTCAmber my beloved 😍 Great work on these pages bro! Also nice to see the return of some of your prior drawings such as that Ellie drawing :)
Ermwhat
2024-01-08 16:11:36 +0000 UTC
