Not much to update you with this week. I rendered the replacement page, and it wasn't working for me. I couldn't figure out why at first because I liked the drawings. I realized that the story and dialogue flowed better if I mashed two pages together.
So here's the first page
Here's the second page.

And here's the mash up
Now it's not like I don't like the other panels I'm getting rid of. I actually quite like Azula's face in that one panel. It's just that this flows better. Now obviously this is still a WIP. It needs a lot of clean up.
Malesor
2024-10-10 22:35:00 +0000 UTC