Ren-Faire ch21 Draft
Added 2020-04-02 19:02:39 +0000 UTCOnce again, apologies that this has been taking so long. The problem with having a story that's snowballed into such a large and sprawling tale is finishing it satisfactorily. Also, writing epic battle scenes is hard.
As there are currently many of you stuck at home I figured it would be fitting to give you a taste of what you've been waiting for, especially since the vast majority of this chapter has been finished and right now I'm just stuck on finishing up the end. So here it is, a Patreon exclusive, the early unfinished draft copy of 'Fitting in at the Renaissance Faire ch. 21.
Please give comments and feedback, specifically on any plot or continuity questions/issues, and anything else that you are wondering about that you feel needs to be addressed. Also, any ideas you may have to improve things or add detail is much appreciated.
I hope you enjoy this work in progress chapter, it's a labor of agonizing love that I really want to finish up so I can move on to other projects, so please help by looking this over and letting me know what I can do to improve and finish it.
(PS: in case you're wondering, yes, the ending has been written, but I'm not giving that away till the final release. Gotta keep somethings a surprise.)
Comments
Thanks for pointing that out. I might have to add to that :)
Coffee Tank
2021-10-09 04:06:25 +0000 UTCYou've done such a good job of showing the changes of all the characters throughout the whole series, it's almost a bit of a shame that Keelin getting her tail was glossed over! It's definitely an interesting chapter though, you're doing a good job.
frozena
2020-09-23 19:40:50 +0000 UTC
