Snagging a Pair of Double D's - Banter File

Story:  “A few of my friends and I are trying to start a sorority. We’ve been collecting girls to pledge “

Sleepygirl:  heheh literally collecting them, it seems like :oP

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“She trailed off, struggling to find a word that was accurate enough without admitting they were essentially having hypnotic orgies.”

Sleepygirl:  nah, just admit you're having orgies, what's the worst that could happen :oP

SleepyHypno: You can't admit to that! I mean you can but then you have to erase their memories... hmmm.

Sleepygirl: exactly, see where i'm going with this? :oP

SleepyHypno: your memory being erased

Sleepygirl: I wasnt talking about my memory!

SleepyHypno: too late in the chamber already...

Sleepygirl: Umm the defense would like to argue this

SleepyHypno: The defense will not remember... [Sleepygirl’s memory eraser trigger went here…]

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giving Klaire a more…personal interview.

Sleepygirl: can only imagine just how personal we're talking here :oP

Sleepyhypno: bow chica bow wow.

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She honestly didn’t think that Klaire would pass up the opportunity.

Sleepygirl: to play devil's advocate, what about Klaire screams "sorority!" :oP

Sleepyhypno: Nothing but you know that, I know that, but the reader doesn't... i mean maybe they do. I don't know.

Sleepygirl: the world may never know…
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“You…WILL…be one of the girls of S.L.E.E.P.!” She said to herself with an evil grin as she closed the door. “I’ll see to it.”

Sleepygirl: nice to see that after all this time that dang acronym still dazes me... :oP

SleepyHypno: It was well chosen.

Sleepygirl: almost like it was intentional...

SleepyHypno: *X-files theme*

Sleepygirl: note to the reader: it was intentional :oP

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It was hard to imagine someone being more perky than Laura, but Jessy had managed to pull it off!

Sleepygirl: accurate description is accurate :oP

Sleepyhypno: I know right…

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they appeared to be completely natural. “Huh.” Rayne thought to herself. “A Double D…those are rare on a college campus”.

Sleepygirl: Roll Credits

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Her eyes were so wide that for a split second Rayne thought she may, in fact, be crazy, but then settled on just heavily caffeinated.

Sleepygirl: hehehe in general that's a fine line

Sleepyhypno: more specifically with Laura

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“And about the hypnosis part of it!”

Sleepygirl: thats where my head would implode :oP

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and to help them relax and unwind after a stressful day.”

Sleepygirl: HOW they help them relax and unwind is completely irrelevant in this situation

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“But I’m afraid I don’t really believe in hypnosis.

Sleepygirl: famous last words for $1,000

Sleepyhypno: I know right, the number of time's i've heard people say this only for them to be completely hypnotized in less then 15 minutes is honestly kind of hilarious.

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Whether this was the result of weeks of slow hypnotic programming, or just her excitable nature and love of being the center of attention, was anyone’s guess.

Sleepygirl: it's about 50/50 :oP

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but with Laura you could never truly be sure.

Sleepygirl: the world may never know..

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“Just let your eyes follow my finger as it moves, slowly and easily, from side….to side. It’s so easy to just follow the finger with your eyes. Letting them drift with the finger, slowly and gently. Every motion just helps the world around you fade away more and more. Nothing matters but the tip of my finger, and the sound of my voice now.”

Sleepygirl: it takes so little for my head to start feeling fuzzy

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The sparkle in her eyes was slowly fading as they began to glaze over while her shoulders slumped and her back arched. Her head had begun to lean forward, as if she were trying to move closer to the finger that she was focused so deeply on.

Sleepygirl: very nice image though... :oP

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But despite that…Jessy couldn’t seem to look away either.

Sleepygirl: that's how it always starts…

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Doing so made Laura’s eyes gently roll upwards as the finger moved higher, and then slowly lower as it moved down and back to its start. Trying to keep track of it made Laura's expression fade even more as her jaw slowly fell open and her eyes struggled to reopen from every blink.

Sleepygirl: something about that image just pushes a hell of a lot of buttons…

Sleepyhypno: probably because you've seen it happen IRL =cP

Sleepygirl: that...is probably true, it was a nice image there too :oP

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just before Rayne tapped her forehead and said “Sleep” in a soft, but commanding, tone.

Sleepygirl: i might have been a bit too focused on that image because i kinda had to jerk myself back awake there for a minute

SleepyHypno: Sleepygirl is weak against hypnosis. It's super effective.

Sleepygirl: Sleepygirl will admit nothing of the sort.

SleepyHypno: See above evidence

Sleepygirl: What evidence?

SleepyHypno: the number of times you dazed out while editing this?

Sleepygirl: irrelevant...

SleepyHypno: no that would be the actual definition of evidence...

Sleepygirl: logic has no place in this conversation

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She landed softly as her body bounced against the mattress, making her breasts jiggle softly before coming to a complete stop. Just like the rest of Laura.

Sleepygirl: also a nice image :oP

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“Why Jessy, I’m demonstrating what it’s like to fall into a hypnotic…” she moved her finger forward and tapped the young woman on the forehead. “Sleep…now.”

Sleepygirl: my brain trailed off...and my eyes kinda closed for a few minutes after the sleep now…

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“Now it’s time to move on to something a little more…fun.”

Sleepygirl: code word for orgy :oP

Sleepyhypno: Actually, yes.

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“Am I invisible?” Rayne asked no one in particular, putting her hands on her hips and glaring at the other two.

Sleepygirl: no but you could be with the right suggestion :oP

SleepyHypno: That's a different story.

Sleepygirl: is it on the list somewhere?

SleepyHypno: Ironically yes.

Sleepygirl: Ok I wasn't actually expecting that

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There was no way she was going to admit that to either of them when she barely wanted to admit it to herself.

Sleepygirl: cant imagine what thats like :oP

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Even her face had managed to go slack in the short time period, but as soon as Jessy began laughing she snapped out of her daze and looked away.

Sleepygirl: boobs are just a little too hypnotic for the poor girl

Sleepyhypno: Yeah... the bigger they are they more effective it seems to make them.

Sleepygirl: it's both a gift and a curse

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mild arousal

Sleepygirl: im gonna guess it's more than mild arousal at this point

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Rayne’s attempts to figure out why this was working on her had been long forgotten,

Sleepygirl: speaking from personal experience, it's usually useless to try and figure out why something works on you :oP the list is endless for me…

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Unaware that her eyelids were starting to slowly close, or that her shoulders had begun to slump, or how her head was starting to tip forward…ever so slightly. Her face was completely expressionless.

Sleepygirl: still a pretty sexy image :oP

Sleepyhypno: I am writing porn here after all…

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upwards and then come down with a hard bounce.

Sleepygirl: ok for the fantasy effect that would work fine, i'm sure, but realistically that would probably hurt like hell :oP

Sleepyhypno: Fantasy story is fantasy.

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“Sleep!”

Sleepygirl: Dammit…

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“Gazongas”

Sleepygirl: I don't know if i should be impressed or disturbed that google knew to autocorrect this?

Sleepyhypno: down with the sickness.

Sleepygirl: it took waaaaay too long for that to register

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Laura gave her friend a very devious, almost villainous, smile

Sleepygirl: she's being too devious and that just kind of makes me want to knock her out... i think i'm in a mood :oP

Sleepyhypno: well you've been knocked out yourself several times so why not.

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“I’m only testing you!”

Sleepygirl: famous last words for 1,000 :oP

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Which, of course, is the point of a shock induction.

Sleepygirl: ya don't say?!

Sleepyhypno: You'd be surprise how many people fuck up that part.

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“You just…you just turned her off?”

Sleepygirl: that is one way to put it, yes :o)

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“And you do this to all of the girls in the sorority?”

Sleepygirl: aaaand then some!

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she struck a pose as she finished the statement.

Sleepygirl: very in character for her :oP

Sleepyhypno: I know right, honestly of everyone writing 'Laura' is the easiest, because she basically acts this way IRL.

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The word “Sleep!” echoed through Jessy’s mind as she let out a surprised gasp that trailed off into a soft sigh. Her eyes rolled up into her head and then slammed shut while her body let go and fell into Laura’s waiting arms.

Sleepygirl: good thing it's harder for instants to daze me while i'm doing this…

Sleepyhypno: challenge accepted.

Sleepygirl: that...wasn't a challenge?!

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making both Jessy and Raynes breasts jiggle

Sleepygirl: had to get one last jiggle in huh

Sleepyhypno: "Pair of Double D's" is in the title.  Jiggles are required.

Sleepygirl: No boobs were harmed in the making of this story

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“Her dark hair covered half of her face, and the slow rise and fall of her chest showed off her breasts quite nicely.”

Sleepygirl: because priorities

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“In a moment, the two of you will find yourselves feeling like sexy, seductive strippers.”

Sleepygirl: can't go wrong with the classics

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Laura murmured “Mmhmm” sleepily in response from her spot on the bed, as Jessy softly whispered “Yess…”

Sleepygirl: clearly they don't mind the idea

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“You can do this…now!” she said, snapping her fingers loud enough to echo off of the dorm’s thin walls.

Sleepygirl: i had to stop and process that for a minute and remind myself that the suggestion wasn't aimed at me...i think it was the 'now' at the end of the sentence

Sleepy Hypno: I don't' think me or any of the readers would mind if you suddenly thought you were a stripper now...

Sleepygirl: i don't doubt that, but don't get your hopes up :oP

Sleepy Hypno: I sense a log in the near future

Sleepygirl: does that log involve me being a stripper, by chance?

Sleepy Hypno: Hell yes!

[This log will definitely be coming once I have a chance to do it!]

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“She knelt on all fours and arched her back, showing off her butt and legs to the non-existent audience in her mind. And the real audience of one watching her every move.”

Sleepygirl: yep that tracks :oP

Sleepy Hypno: LOL, yes, the extrovert, even the innocent one would be the one to know how a stripper would behave wouldn't she...

Sleepygirl: yes, it's just...fitting

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“Her eyes were unfocused and glazed.”

Sleepygirl: mmm...nothing like a glazed expression to push buttons

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“All while her head bobbed from side to side and then back in simulated pleasure before she repeated the movement.”

Sleepygirl: my head went further into the gutter here for a minute

Sleepy Hypno: Blatant sexual imagery is blatant

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“Either way, it was sexy as hell to Rayne”

Sleepygirl: and our author...and editor...and audience..

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“boring, but supportive, dark green bra”

Sleepygirl: the supportive ones are always the boring ones

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“a mismatched pair of black panties.”

Sleepygirl: as if rayne cared whether they matched or not :oP hehehe

SleepyHypno: I was more trying to point out the old adage that if a girls bra and pantys match, sex was not your idea. Meaning if a girl takes the time to match her bra and pantys, she was intending on them being seen. Which is supposed to hint subtly that Laura's programming is making her more... sexual because her bra and panys matched, but Jessy's did not. It's more of a long game kind of story line im laying seeds for now.

Sleepygirl: and now it all makes sense

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“She was…if you wanted to look at it from a certain point of view…hypnotized by the scene in front of her”

Sleepygirl: pun intended

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“You know, like a good stripper duet should”

Sleepygirl: i didn't realize this was a requirement for stripper duets

SleepyHypno: synchronization is important in any aspect of a show

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“It was at this point that Rayne’s mind, more or less, checked out”

Sleepygirl: i can't imagine why

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“The hand that had been caressing her thigh had openly slid between her legs, and the hand on her chest had begun to massage her own impressive, albeit smaller, breasts. With a panting, almost trembling voice she softly said “Come to me.” to the two hypnotized coeds.”

Sleepygirl: that escalated quickly

SleepyHypno: I was spacing on how to drag this out any further

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““Kneel.” the redheaded freshman said, with even more of a nervous rumble in her voice. The two hypnotized women both knelt down in front of Rayne, Laura slowly slid her hands along Rayne’s arm as she did, still very much in the mindset of being a hypnotized stripper.”

Sleepygirl: that image, for some reason, has been the one to push the most buttons so far

SleepyHypno: Rayne telling Laura to kneel? or Laura getting on her knees all spaced out?

Sleepygirl: Yes?

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“She moved in closer before sliding her right hand over to Laura’s breast, where she slowly began to caress it softly. An action that earned a satisfied moan from the entranced blond. Next her left hand moved to the massive globe that was Jessy’s left breast. Her hands couldn’t even fit around her natural DD, but that made it no less enjoyable for Rayne. “

Sleepygirl: always good to have a size comparison for these situations :oP

SleepyHypno: it's the details that make the story engrossing

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“The desire disappeared as she felt Jessy’s lips begin to tease and suck on her exposed nipple“

Sleepygirl: that'll do it

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“The pleasure of the kiss, Jessy’s mouth on her breast, and the new addition of Jessy’s free hand squeezing and caressing Rayne’s breast, all easily overrode her attempt to speak”

Sleepygirl: and laura still has two free hands…

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“Rayne’s hips gyrated against Laura’s fingers as they continued stimulating her friend, and hypnotists’, pleasure centers like an expert. “

Sleepygirl: my buttons are getting sufficiently pushed and for once i have no snarky comment

SleepyHypno: *marks calendar*

Sleepygirl: *sticks tongue out*

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“The redhead’s body shook with pleasure as she panted and bit her lip to prevent herself from screaming”

Sleepygirl: you'd have to be biting your lip pretty damn hard there

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“Sleep!”

Sleepygirl: dammit…

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“The effect was instantaneous on Laura.”

Sleepygirl: as you would expect

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“Her mouth slid off of Rayne’s nipple as her body slowly slumped backwards until she was flat on her back next to Laura, wearing the same blank expression on her face.”

Sleepygirl: also a nice image…

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“You won’t need to remember what happened while you were in that state, or how you got there…exactly…just that you were both hypnotized, and that it felt so good.”

Sleepygirl: that seems right...i mean, girls were made to be hypnotized anyway so who needs details

[This is actually a little hypnotic suggestion i’ve been putting in the girls, that whenever they see certain words, like ‘girl’ or ‘hypnotized’ (yeah nothing too generic there, great job idiot) they respond with “Girls were made to be hypnotized” and don’t even realize they have done it. You’ll be seeing more of this in the future as I’m enjoying it a lot But here is a little snippet as a teaser this is from the log for ‘Mannequins on Display’ and was done later in the evening the same day Sleepygirl posted that comment:

Sleepyhypno 12:30 AM

Ladies what were girls made for?

Ivy 12:30 AM

Girls were made to be hypnotized

Sleepygirl 12:30 AM

girls were made to be hypnotized

Kitty 12:31 AM

girls are made to be hypnotized

Princess 12:31 AM

That's great LOL!

Sleepyhypno 12:31 AM

I thought you'd approve =cP

Please note that Princess has not yet been given that suggestion, but the other three have been, although the wording and actual structure of how the suggestion works on each girl is wildly different because consistency and structure is for wimps]

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“You will find that you are not only okay with showing up to the next sorority meeting, you're actually eager and excited to do so…isn’t that right?”

Sleepygirl: just me over here trying to keep myself from answering 'yes'...effective wording is effective

Sleepy Hypno: I look forward to seeing you at the next sorority meeting

Sleepygirl: keep that hope alive

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“Of course she was completely oblivious to the fact that the memory had been sanitized”

Sleepygirl: heheh well that's one way to put it

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“Dress comfortably, I have a feeling you’ll be taking a nap!”

Sleepygirl: as if she won't :oP

SleepyHypno: I mean Laura is one of the officers (aka hypnotists) but the competitive nature between Trisha and Rayne probably means that more then the plebs will end up under.

Sleepygirl: ok you're good to go with this one!

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“Wait, what do you mean it’s my turn?”

Sleepygirl: I'll take famous last words for $1,000 Alex

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“She finished, wording her question as more of a suggestion.”

Sleepygirl: another suggestion for the editor to ignore...

SleepyHypno: I'm sorry you failed the "why don't we try hypnosis" suggestion years ago

Sleepygirl: I don't think that's how that went :oP

SleepyHypno: by all means, please give us your memory of the situation please ?

Sleepygirl: It was 20 years ago, how am I supposed to know?!

SleepyHypno: Yeah, you've forgotten so much in that time =cP

Sleepygirl: would you care to inform the audience just how much? :oP

SleepyHypno: Nope

Sleepygirl: would you care to inform the editor just how much?

SleepyHypno: Nope

Sleepygirl: *glares and sticks tongue out*

SleepyHypno: Why not add one more. it's time for you to forget Sleepygirl

Sleepygirl: its time for me to forget

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“And don’t you dare start talking about boobs again!”

Sleepygirl: where's the fun in that?

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“Oh no, that would be repetitive!”

Sleepygirl: yes of course, we can't be too repetitive with boobs in the story titled "Snagging a Pair of Double D's" :oP

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“Her expression was completely slack and empty, and even though her eyes were focusing on Jessy, she could easily see that Rayne was looking right through her. The light behind her eyes, her personality and everything that made her Rayne, was completely…turned off. Deeply asleep.“

Sleepygirl: i do love that expression…

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Laura looked over at Jessy and smiled. “Watch this!”

Sleepygirl: she's like a kid in a candy store :oP

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“Her eyes remained glassy and dilated as she stared up at Jessy with the same empty look in her eyes. “

Sleepygirl: buttons pushed…

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“If you look into her eyes now, Jessy…past the glaze, past the empty look, if you really look very deeply into her eyes, you can see her soul. You can see the parts of her that are hidden from the world. The parts that really help you to connect with her, to feel what she feels. To know what it’s like to be her…here and now, Jessy.”

Sleepygirl: always a good sign when i'm dazed before i even start reading the induction…

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And most importantly…feeling what it’s like to be deeply, completely hypnotized now. Isn’t that right, Jessy?”

Sleepygirl: resisting the urge to answer this with yes...even though thats what keeps looping in my brain

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“That peaceful tingling, moving through her mind and body.”

Sleepygirl: the tingling is always nice…

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Jessy took a slow breath in and exhaled gently. “Hypnotized…”

Sleepygirl: yeah that's definitely...sexy :oP

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“And you feel it now…don’t you Jessy?” “

Sleepygirl: the...compulsion to answer all of these with 'yes' is...a little stronger than i anticipated

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“Although as she thought about it, she couldn’t think of a single time she’d seen Rayne hypnotized.”

Sleepygirl: memory gaps are irrelevant

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“There was something thrilling about seeing someone new go into a trance for the first time. Seeing someone you know, and have known for years, slip way into that relaxed, helpless state for the very first time”

Sleepygirl: speaking from personal experience i take it? :oP

SleepyHypno: yes actually

Sleepygirl: yeah that was more snarky than i intended it, i would imagine its kind of thrilling actually

Sleepyhypno: oh… it is!

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“It was as if admitting that she was hypnotized allowed her mind to completely surrender, and for her to sink even deeper…physically and mentally.”

Sleepygirl: funny how that works

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“Sleep. Staying upright, nice and strong, but letting yourself just…sink and sleep.”

Sleepygirl: and down i went…

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“Ooo…” Laura said under her breath. “I love how that looks.”

Sleepygirl: im sure she's not the only one

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“Her only response was a soft “Yes…” from both Jessy and Rayne, neither of whom was consciously aware of what they had just really agreed to.”

Sleepygirl: that's hardly important…

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“This is a direct continuation and follow up to Alt Ending 1, and Alt chapter 1.1. And yes I really do need a better way to word this stuff. “

Sleepygirl: you kind of do, yes :oP

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“While Laura turned her attention to Jessy, Rayne grabbed Laura’s face and pulled her into a deep, passionate kiss and held her there while her deepest, most hidden desire rose to the surface. “

Sleepygirl: proof that you never know what will happen when you snap your fingers :oP

SH: *snaps fingers*

Sleepygirl: blinks i'm not sure what you were expecting to happen there :oP

SH: "her deepest, most hidden desire rose to the surface. Comment end " *evil grin snaps fingers*

Sleepygirl: grins playfully and seductively do we really want an audience for that?

CENSORED!

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“But as Rayne passionately kissed Laura, a more…sexual side of her seemed to come out.“

Sleepygirl: aaaand cue the orgy

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“Just look into my eyes, and let yourself start to sink…deeper and deeper…like you have before.”

Sleepygirl: love how even when there are no eyes for me to be looking into, my brain is just kind of like "ok...that sounds nice..."

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“That you could make a connection by looking into a person 's eyes, and that you would feel what they felt. And if they were hypnotized, like Rayne was, then you yourself could end up…just as deeply hypnotized. “

Sleepygirl: that...is definitely a rather sexy idea

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Her arms were already becoming too heavy to move, and her mind was starting to grow fuzzy.

Sleepygirl: have to admit that being fuzzy does feel pretty nice, though

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“The more you struggle… the more you resist, the more energy you use…the more your body becomes tired…and weak. The more your mind seems to simply…drift away.”

Sleepygirl: cue the editor becoming fuzzy…

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“That’s a girl…” Rayne continued, “struggling only makes you weaker…only makes you drift deeper and deeper down into helplessness. Into a deep…obedient trance...”

Sleepygirl: pushing a lot of buttons right here…

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She felt her body shiver and tingle under the pleasure that both girls were providing her, and she could feel Rayne’s words sliding into her mind and echoing throughout it. She wanted to giggle or smile, but all her body could do was shiver and moan. She felt the world closing in around her and felt her mind becoming fuzzy and blank, until finally she let out a soft sigh and relaxed as she slipped into a deep hypnotic trance.

Sleepygirl: ok i was a little too focused on that paragraph while i was reading over it…

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“The deeper I go, the deeper you go…” She began as she moved her fingers deeper inside of her friend. “The more pleasure you feel, the more you simply want to sink. And the more you sink, the more pleasure you feel… all the way down. Deeply…” she moved her fingers as deep into Laura as she could, “and completely…mine now Laura.” she finished seductively.

Sleepygirl: let's just say this pushed a lot of buttons…

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If this had been a cartoon you would have heard her mind ‘ping’ at that exact moment,

SLeepygirl: why does that seem so familiar?

SH: Nnnnooooooo reason at all.

Sleepygirl: that...seems very suspicious eyebrow raise

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“That’s a girl.” she whispered, “Just cum for me, now.” As she said the words she couldn’t help feel a wave of pleasure wash through her own body.

Sleepygirl: and buttons pushed again…

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Jessy, who was busy doing her best to stimulate Laura’s nipple through her shirt, couldn’t help but hear the command from Rayne and accidentally interpreted it as being aimed at her.

Sleepygirl: always fun when you accidentally cause an orgasm in someone

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“Good girls.” she started. “Now, all hypnotized girls need to sleep…and forget…now!” she said as she snapped her fingers.

Sleepygirl: i almost expected this to knock me out…

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Her eyes fluttered and rolled up into her head, just before they slipped closed. As they did, her head gently lolled to the side as the grin slowly faded from her face and she drifted away into a nice, relaxing sleep.

Sleepygirl: yeah that...was a nice image…

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Her head dropped down onto Laura’s chest and rolled to the side, sliding onto the bed as her eyes slowly fluttered closed. She had been so caught up in giving her suggestion to the others, and fulfilling her own primal desires, that she’d forgotten that she was also one of the hypnotized girls. The same girls she had told to sleep…and forget.

Sleepygirl: and there is something very sexy about that

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she never had time and being around people made her instantly nervous when she walked into a room.

Sleepygirl: i feel this on both counts :oP

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“I’ve always wanted to try being hypnotized!”

Sleepygirl: famous last words :oP

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“In fact, they both used those exact words. Weird isn’t it?”

Sleepygirl: not that they were programmed to say that, nope, couldn't possibly be because of that... :oP

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“And of course…” Trisha continued, “there is that wonderful smell. That aroma that just seems to move into your nostrils as you take a long…slow…deep breath…and fill your lungs with the wonderful scent… of fresh brewed coffee.” As she spoke, all three girls took a nice deep breath,

Sleepygirl: along with the editor…

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focus on what you are doing now

Sleepygirl: and of course that made me feel more focused on editing…

Sleepyhypno: Now the real question was, was that the ultimate purpose all along?

Sleepygirl: for as much as i end up tranced while editing these, do we really think focusing is an issue? :oP

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Rayne watched as Christine’s eyes followed the slow circular motion that Trisha was using to add the creamer.

Sleepygirl: honestly i could see myself getting sucked in by that too

Sleepyhypno: Funny part is, the IRL girl hated cream in her coffee and always drank it black.

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Trisha’s smile grew as she saw just how engrossed Christine was in the coffee. She slowly set down the creamer and picked up a stirring stick, then began to slowly swirl the coffee around in the cup, creating a small but effective spiral.

Sleepygirl: great now i'm imagining a spiral in a cup of coffee…

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You can imagine how it would feel along your tongue…hot and then cold…blending together into a sweet, smooth blend of pure relaxation. Pure bliss and enjoyment. You can feel that to be true now, can’t you Christine?”

Sleepygirl: i don't even drink coffee that much, why am i zoning out to this

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“Sleep.”

Sleepygirl: and down goes the editor…

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“Sleep!”

Sleepygirl: dammit…

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One more blink, and her eyes fluttered, barely open at all. One final blink and her eyes never reopened.

Sleepygirl: blinking was a struggle for this paragraph…

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You like that, don’t you ladies?”

Sleepygirl: it's directed at two fictional people, yet here i am sitting here trying to not answer yes.

Sleepyhypno: feel free to reply after all you are a girl like they are.

Sleepygirl: girls were made to be hypnotized...i'll keep that in mind for when it happens again, probably in a page or two :oP

[Authors Note: did you notice that she responded to a trigger without even realizing it?]

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She watched as Rayne slowly moved her hands up to her friend’s temples and started to rub them slowly.

Sleepygirl: well if the gum wrapper didn't put me out, this definitely would

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Christine…you wanted to just let go… wanted to relax and know what it felt like to sink, deep into a nice…relaxing…hypnotic…sleep!”

Sleepygirl: and down i go again...i've lost track of how many times this has happened in this one already

Sleepyhypno: Five

Sleepygirl: glad you're keeping track for the viewing audience

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“What’s your next trick?”

Sleepygirl: never ask a hypnotist that…

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“That’s a girl, just focus on my eyes…focus and relax. I saw you almost slip under. I saw you watch as your friend slowly surrendered…slowly sank…and now it’s your turn, isn’t it?”

Sleepygirl: uh huh…

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“That’s a girl…then it’s time, like your friend did, that you…sleep!”

Sleepygirl: crap...dazed again

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“Both Rayne and Christine were in a waking trance, and neither of them knew it.“

Sleepygirl: yeah that's just sexy... :oP

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“She said, leaning heavily on the obvious trigger she had planted in both young women.“

Sleepygirl: because sometimes you just have to be blunt with your triggers

SH: OMG so much…

Sleepygirl: speaking from experience?

SH: yes actually.

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““And I definitely don’t think that talk of…stripping…would have been hypnotic at all.””

Sleepygirl: and when in doubt, just bludgeon them over the head with the next trigger :oP

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“but to watch both girls slowly strip off each other’s clothing as they continued to kiss and grope one another was even more arousing than she’d anticipated.”

Sleepygirl: planning for an orgy is one thing, having it actually happen in front of you is totally different apparently? :oP

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“We need to get dressed again and I need to erase your memories.””

Sleepygirl: nowhere else could a sentence like "ok i need to erase your memory" be so commonly used…

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“Sleep!”

Sleepygirl: Dammit

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“It just felt…perfectly natural. “

Sleepygirl: funny how things like that can just feel perfectly natural sometimes :oP

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You can do that, can’t you?”

Sleepygirl: successfully managed not to answer yes to this question, i call that a win

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“So it shouldn’t be too hard for someone as…smart and adventurous as you are, to see that doing something new like…joining a new group. Might open up some new doors for you…in your mind.”

Sleepygirl: i mean it does make sense (says the reader)...

Sleepyhypno: Joining the sorority are you?

Sleepygirl: no i'm not, dang it, i'm just suggestible..

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“I’d like to go to a meeting. If only to see if I’d like it!” Rayne said, wording it as if it were Klaire’s own thoughts and not her suggestions.

Sleepygirl: ok yeah that pushes buttons…

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After all, you should probably…sleep on it…now.

Sleepygirl: stoop trying to make me fuzzy dang it…

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In fact I think you should sleep…now Klaire.

Sleepygirl: i think i stared at the screen for about 5 minutes just kind of zoning out when i read this...my name isn't even Klaire :oP

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“A very…dark dance club”

Sleepygirl: that describes every dance club ever :oP

SH: I know right... but you know... description!

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“You can do that can’t you ladies?””

Sleepygirl: yes…

[Author’s Note: I may have hypnotized Sleepygirl before she edited this part… so you know]

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“Christine’s face flushed with excitement as she sank down into her seat and nodded agreeably.“

Sleepygirl: i think i'd be a combination of the two responses at this poin

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There was almost a dominance in the way that Trisha slid her hand behind Christine’s neck and used a small handful of her friend’s hair to pull her head closer and hold her in the kiss.

Sleepygirl: thats actually an arousing image..

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Some even seemed mildly aroused as they watched in fascination.

Sleepygirl: including the editor...although i'm not watching anything, just imagining it

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Not to mention how arousing it was to be so easily hypnotized by Rayne.

Sleepygirl: i think im channeling my own arousal into the editing…

SH: by all means =cP

Sleepygirl: i can't put that to use at work :oP

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Trisha and Rayne gave each other a knowing smile. “Yeah it was kind of odd, but such a good feeling…don’t you agree?”

Sleepygirl: yes…

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Rayne took the opportunity to stand in front of Christine and stare deeply into her eyes. “I think you can agree now…” Rayne started, in a voice that echoed through Christine’s mind, “that you simply must join the sorority…isn’t that right?”

Sleepygirl: yes

[Authors note: I really shouldn’t make sleepygirl think she’s a part of S.L.E.E.P. … i really shouldn’t…]

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“As much as I enjoyed your performance earlier…I think it’s time that the two of you pleasured me.” She said, stroking the cheeks of her two hypnotized friends.

Sleepygirl: nice way to put that energy from earlier to use :oP

Sleepyghypno: reduce, reuse, recycle.

Sleepygirl: gives new meaning to that...