Combat Healer Ch. 54
Added 2023-12-24 00:00:03 +0000 UTCDecember 23, 2023
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FEEDBACK: Thoughts?
1. Were the unexpected 'proposals' touching?
2. How do you feel about some of the budding friendships? (Like between Lyla and Val.)
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My answers to the questions: Were the proposals touching? No. How do you feel about Lyla and Val as friends? As long as they are friends, I think that Val could be a great influence on Lyla. Personally, I hope they don't become lesbian lovers. That's just not my thing, and we already have a couple of those. Constructive criticism: If you want the proposals to be touching, spend more time (words) on developing the relationship to make it believable. The only instantly believable marriage proposal would be with the elven queen. They were in love with each other and apparently still are. Only political things are of concern with the marriage. After that, the most believable proposal would be to Wren. She has demonstrated her love and dedication to him, and he finds her attractive. After all, she is a 'clone' of the Elven girl he fell in love with. In comparison, let's consider the three that he proposed to in this chapter. The Oni was his girlfriend (with benefits), but I had not seen any great deepening of the relationship. We are also told that Oni are notorious for casual sex. The marriage proposal seemed to come without a backdrop story of developing commitment to things more than friend-with-benefits. Then there is the cow, Val. She is actually my kind of woman in that she has demonstrated her extreme dedication to Alister, has a very kind and caring soul, and is willing to defend her family. That's so cool. However, his promise to marry her was made when he thought she never would achieve what he asked. It's obvious that he doesn't find her attractive as he fucks everything monster, human, non-human, and in-between (he was even considering fucking Lyla in this very chapter) - but he has not fucked Val. This is true to life in that sometimes a person loves someone who doesn't love them back. Then Lyla??? He spent his time hating her not so far back, and her reactions seem very immature. Why would he want to marry her? There were no words to suggest that they had such a deep and meaningful relationship as to result in a marriage proposal. All in all, I'd say dear Allie is more like a horn dog fucking women as they come and not spending enough time with any particular one to have a deep and significant relationship. Even this chapter portrayed Alister as kind of 'let me propose and hurry on to my personal business, separating from these girls I love once again'. If he wasn't going to marry based on heart-felt emotions, I would think that marrying the human princess/queen-to-be would also be an expedient choice. If you want these proposals to be touching, the relationships need to be believable. We need to see a relationship that is deeper than casual sex.
Creative Amoeba
2024-04-07 18:53:51 +0000 UTCYou know, I'm glad that a mention of Lyla and Wren has been made. I've been kind of looking forward those two meeting. For that matter, a meeting of all the women. What a beast of a team, I can't wait! Good stuff!
Jonathan Depenau
2023-12-24 15:20:00 +0000 UTCFirst time could have been coincidence because he was with Eliza but these last two are because he became half changeling, as far as dynamics go, I have a feeling he’s going to have trouble, especially since we don’t know the exact whereabouts of the half Eldritch’s mother, she could have taken them over in the time it’s taken to clear out the horde outside.
Pedro Comenda
2023-12-24 07:43:18 +0000 UTCDecent chapter, after all that high we had to have a mellow to start tying all the plot development together. I'm really looking forward to a disbelieving "what the actual f" moment when they see the concubines fight with remitay covering long range and Blake combo draining armies at close distance whilst blood drunk giggling. At this point the MC has the death dog squad to deal with and the southern king with the eldrich girl sidekick, the update for the queen and the longer term story with the greater eldrichs. I guess there might be a short term pissing competition with the MC and Oni that got rejected. I guess there should be a few more solidifying chapters.
Moi465
2023-12-24 07:30:35 +0000 UTCadditionally- did not see Lyla and Val coming. But interesting dynamic.
Silent Count
2023-12-24 01:27:36 +0000 UTCIt is satisfying to see the women bonding among themselves. Not just Val and Lyla, but Mel and Lyla and even Eliza and Lyla and the elves and Val, etc.
Christopher Miller
2023-12-24 00:41:33 +0000 UTCYour twist of having the six women showing up in the dungeon caught me off guard. I didn't see it coming until they were "engulfed", and then everything sort of clicked. I did enjoy the impromptu proposals, with Lyla and Astaer (and I'm assuming Celestine will as well) joining in. Quite a bit has changed in the couple of weeks since he met Mel. He goes from no romantic prospects whatsoever, since he didn't know about Val, Wren, Lyla or Eliza. Now he's going to have a half dozen wives and multiple concubines, including a couple of queens. I'd include Wren, Sylvia, Blake, and Remitay as concubines with Erika/Jasmine as a wife despite her submissiveness since it'd be hard to justify her being any less to her subjects.
Christopher Miller
2023-12-24 00:36:39 +0000 UTCGreat chapter! I'm liking the dynamic between the two girls. The unexpected proposals were ok kinda felt forces kr maybe unfortunate timing but it didn't detract from the story.
SovietDegendays
2023-12-24 00:32:10 +0000 UTCapologies - gamer lingo. Translates to Woooooo as in "woohoo" or a exclamation of celebration. Also - first to comment. :D
Silent Count
2023-12-24 00:13:50 +0000 UTCLol, what? Are you saying 'whoa' or is it a mistype?
Author Kaizer Wolf
2023-12-24 00:11:19 +0000 UTCw000000
Silent Count
2023-12-24 00:02:24 +0000 UTC
