MC: the marked girl p7
Added 2024-05-28 14:51:18 +0000 UTCSafety... or is it?
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As per usual, any comment is appreciated. Let me know what you think and what you like/dislike
Let me know what you think
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Aw thanks ^_^
MaLAguA
2024-05-28 15:12:30 +0000 UTCOh... that's serious. Maybe i need to dramatize things more? Because shortening the pace between outloads would mean that the comic would take more time as I'm doing the individual pages (and less comments since everyone just posts at the end)
MaLAguA
2024-05-28 15:10:57 +0000 UTCNice action sequence, and her stress and panic are well-conveyed... I'm just not feeling it very intensely. Not sure why that is, possibly the pace of releases. "We'll see more next time."
David Fenger
2024-05-28 15:01:55 +0000 UTCOoohh! I recognize the outline of that traveler! Acute hearing and strong protective instinct... I think the girl has a chance after all! Love the idea and presentation of the traveller and his ward in shadow/outline. Absolutely fantastic!
wjd1206
2024-05-28 14:59:28 +0000 UTC
