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MC: the marked girl p7

Safety... or is it?

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As per usual, any comment is appreciated. Let me know what you think and what you like/dislike

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MC: the marked girl p7 MC: the marked girl p7

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Aw thanks ^_^

MaLAguA

Oh... that's serious. Maybe i need to dramatize things more? Because shortening the pace between outloads would mean that the comic would take more time as I'm doing the individual pages (and less comments since everyone just posts at the end)

MaLAguA

Nice action sequence, and her stress and panic are well-conveyed... I'm just not feeling it very intensely. Not sure why that is, possibly the pace of releases. "We'll see more next time."

David Fenger

Ooohh! I recognize the outline of that traveler! Acute hearing and strong protective instinct... I think the girl has a chance after all! Love the idea and presentation of the traveller and his ward in shadow/outline. Absolutely fantastic!

wjd1206


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