The golden city 1-5
Added 2023-07-11 16:23:22 +0000 UTCIn the depths of the jungle, intrepid adventurer, Alessandra Torres follows a lead that takes her to a city of treasure and magic.
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EDIT: Page 5 is up. The next 5 pages will be in a different post.
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This is a commission done for https://www.furaffinity.net/user/walnut45
He wanted a sort of sequel for Matilda Wildingham's story (From Raptor Run), but wanted for a more definitive ending for her adventure, so, as a compromised, we came up with this new character to suit the story he had in mind.
This was a fun project to work on, albeit one that forced me to work on things I don't usually practice. Still, hope the result is of everyone's liking.
Given the length of this sequence. I wonder if people would prefer all of it to be contained within this post or for each page to have its own post?
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As per usual, any comment is appreciated. Let me know what you think and what you like/dislike
Comments
I like that our expert explorer actually gets winded from all those stairs. And of course perks up right away upon seeing all the gold.
David Fenger
2023-08-04 15:06:57 +0000 UTC5 pages a post seems like a healthy balance, looking forward to more.
Daltheer
2023-07-25 18:02:10 +0000 UTCThink i'll start postin twice a week to not leave you guys waiting.
MaLAguA
2023-07-25 17:46:41 +0000 UTCThe fun's gonna begin soon...~
TheScottishFox
2023-07-25 17:15:10 +0000 UTCHope u like it :)
MaLAguA
2023-07-11 20:30:02 +0000 UTCNot sure i follow, to make how many page updates per post? I guess i could consider it, but the question i was making was about having multiple pages in one post or giving each page its own post.
MaLAguA
2023-07-11 20:29:53 +0000 UTCI've been playing Tears of the Kingdom a lot, and this feels reminiscent of it... Looks like an interesting start. If there are a lot of pages, perhaps breaking it into chapter-posts would work? A month or two worth of pages on one post, then move to the next at a thematic break?
David Fenger
2023-07-11 18:35:44 +0000 UTCDefinitely looking forward to this. I love your longer sequences. ^_^
Neon Kitsune
2023-07-11 17:03:41 +0000 UTCExcited to see how this one goes. (I gotta commission you myself sometime!)
TheScottishFox
2023-07-11 16:26:07 +0000 UTC
