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Poor Goofy. He lost his Kevin, though I hope you don't go alternate reality like the wandering inn. Looking forward to this arc and Mark getting involved on the political level to match his power level. Mark isn't like Erick with a good sense of people outside his union sense range, so I kinda see him floundering, but it seems interesting. I'm curious what Walter will do after this. Seems like a great opportunity to try and turn Mark into an Okuanan asset if he spills what he knows regardless of whether Doomo was making a legitimate offer to the goblins. He could seemingly sell not divulging the offer about Mark before because of that ambiguity.

Benjamin Meyers

I like you indicated that they wanted to trade mark to the goblins- then within 5 chapters or so it happened. Like no need to extend out the plot that long. You set up to execution well. Plus you seeded it well once you established it was a possibility. I was big sus about the teleporter stuff, turns out was right to be.

Cameron C


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