Demon lord chapter 2 p16
Added 2021-04-29 15:55:55 +0000 UTCI've spend way too much time on the last panel. My monkey brain can't draw symmetrical face.
So yeah as usual any mistake or suggestion let's me know.
Special thank for those who always help me with dialouge. and grammar i'm truly grateful.
Comments
You're always really great at drawing those evil expressions!
Sera
2021-04-30 21:15:42 +0000 UTC@Emma Draper I've been working on an adaptation that involves a couple Demon OCs in a nightmare sequence of this.
Arthur Yeung
2021-04-30 14:18:50 +0000 UTCIf Aria's not interested in joining up, is the Demon Lord taking applications for sexy demon henchladies? ...asking for a friend.
Emma Draper
2021-04-30 12:34:53 +0000 UTCThe time you spent at the last panel... was ABSOLUTELY worth it! It looks great!!
Radiant Xyz
2021-04-30 05:30:14 +0000 UTC“Come to the Demon Side, ‘me’. We have soft breasts, thicc thighs, and revenge on those bastard humans.”
Asani
2021-04-30 00:41:24 +0000 UTCThis has got to be my favorite series <3
UltraOrbZero
2021-04-29 21:25:52 +0000 UTCDespite not really leading to anything (yet?) it is interesting, makes me wish that we got to see Gilbert’s mental breakdown in comic form.
MagicCobra911
2021-04-29 21:22:33 +0000 UTCCan't wait for more
Altrus
2021-04-29 19:40:17 +0000 UTCsign me up
D Banks
2021-04-29 17:43:21 +0000 UTCI love it
D Banks
2021-04-29 17:43:14 +0000 UTCamazing !! men changed in a sexy devilin
Stormfries
2021-04-29 16:37:09 +0000 UTCeveryday life serving a demon lord
StarGazer
2021-04-29 16:18:17 +0000 UTCHer corruption is so good... I want to see her give in!
spectria.limina
2021-04-29 16:12:29 +0000 UTCI cant wait to see the entire thing finished and I can watch it through instead of page by page.
Ian Hsieh
2021-04-29 16:12:14 +0000 UTCAh the what-if if Aria had simply accepted her darker side. The three look wonderful together!
Arbiter
2021-04-29 16:10:15 +0000 UTCPanel 4, "get back on" -> "get back at" (not much to say, prepositions are hard). "Those human" -> "those humans". "They dirty work" -> "their dirty work" (possessive). "Those church" doesn't quite work as "church" isn't a noun for people. Either "the church" or use it like an adjective: "those church people" like "those church scum", etc. "That've forced" is probably better as "that forced" imo, but that might just be because of the fact that the comic is spread put. "that've" kind of implies something recent and new, as opposed to something that's buried in the past. Or it implies emphasis. Also if you change to "the church" it would need to be "that's" to match the singular. Either way, "betrayed" -> "betray" because it is in a relative clause, so it needs to be the infinitive.
spectria.limina
2021-04-29 16:03:57 +0000 UTCI am a little confused though about Aria’s decisions after this, it didn’t seem like she was conflicted, just that she had a little more attitude/feistiness to her personality.
MagicCobra911
2021-04-29 16:03:52 +0000 UTCPanel 3 missing a period after "each other". "It's" -> "it" (it's is a contraction for "it is").
spectria.limina
2021-04-29 16:00:53 +0000 UTC@ibenz009 Truth be told, I actually thought the sketch was anatomically correct!
Arthur Yeung
2021-04-29 15:59:37 +0000 UTCWel Damn for some reason it didn’t occur to me that the Demon Lord was going to be naked in that reunion panel😏. This page looks very good and flows quite well.
MagicCobra911
2021-04-29 15:59:34 +0000 UTCWow looks good
Victor
2021-04-29 15:58:02 +0000 UTC
