Demon lord chapter 2 p11
Added 2021-03-25 17:30:26 +0000 UTCNew page update.
Sorry this page took longer than I expect redraw it didnt help too lol.
Got hades addiction for few day too...
Anyway if you want to help with my awful grammar or have suggestion on dialouge feel free to post it in the comment.
Comments
11.1.1 Let's play with your head next. That face is too kind and innocent looking for a demon. How's about (I give you) a pair of (little) horns? 11.2.2 it's looking => those look 11.3.1 Look like => {delete} the shadow => the shadows you flesh => your flesh begone => be gone leave => leaving 11.3.2 Now we mustn't forget about your backside. Give it some [definition / shape], and how about a (nice long) tail? 11.4.1 Oh and look, another core has grown. You are (proving) very compatible with dark magic. 11.4.2 Ahh that's right, I recall you telling me that before the Church took you in, your family came from an ancient bloodline of [black / dark] mages.
Asani
2021-03-26 00:43:26 +0000 UTCAnd Demon Lord said, "Let Aria have curves." And so Aria became thicc. And Demon Lord gazed over what she had wrought, and saw that it was delicious.
Asani
2021-03-26 00:43:18 +0000 UTCI checked, so yeah you indeed did re sketch it. Seems like Aria’s new skin tone is the same as the Demon Lord’s. One thing about this part of the comic I wonder is Aria’s emerging physical makeup, is her body supposed to be like a ghost where it is see through?
MagicCobra911
2021-03-25 20:51:21 +0000 UTCAria is turning into a beautiful shadow demon! The new Demon Lord should be proud of their work :)
Arbiter
2021-03-25 18:35:16 +0000 UTC"Let's go with your head next. Your face is too innocent looking, too kind for a demon. Let's add something a little spikey, huh?" "Ah, yes I remember now. Before the church, you used to tell me that your family comes from an ancient bloodline of dark magic users." "Oh? Another core has grown. You're quiet compactable with dark magic, aren't you~" "And who can forget your backside, why not add a tail for the fun of it?" "Looks like the shadow will soon consume your whole body. Your flesh and blood will be a memory, only the eternal shadow left behind."
StarGazer
2021-03-25 17:32:38 +0000 UTCOh yes! Can't wait for the complete chapter!
Ian Hsieh
2021-03-25 17:32:20 +0000 UTC
