Liliraune comic sketch page 5-7
Added 2020-06-01 21:46:11 +0000 UTCAnother 3 page sketch are done.
If you found any mistake on grammar or have better suggestion for word choiced feel free to tell me in the comment sorry if I work a bit slow. thank you for you guy patience and still suporting this patreon.
Comments
This is killing it on the story, and that's what counts right now.
Asani
2020-06-03 13:54:58 +0000 UTCI was about to say, there are a good amount of spelling errors, but someone already addressed them lol
TheMotionHero
2020-06-02 19:40:46 +0000 UTCPage 7 Panel 1: Whoa....!? Is the nectar making her breasts bigger? Maybe I should drink some... Panel 2: fine Panel 3: fine
Arbiter
2020-06-01 22:03:13 +0000 UTCPage 6 Panel 1: ....! Damnit, I've tried to ignore it but looks like I'm stuck too.. So much for the use Anna as bait plan Panel 2: fine Panel 3: fine Panel 4: fine
Arbiter
2020-06-01 22:00:52 +0000 UTCI can see a few spelling errors here and there Page 5 1st panel: Blah Gross it's so sticky! Gah it's getting into my mouth too huh!? 2nd panel: fine 3rd panel: fine 4th panel: Lucia was my hand always this green? It depends, do you want me to sugar coat it? 5th panel: Well I need to go now you can have all of this nectar It's so sticky I can't get out. Nooo Lucia help me, where are you going! See you at the festival
Arbiter
2020-06-01 21:57:37 +0000 UTCIt's looks amazing already! Love how the nectar is cocooning her as well XD
StarGazer
2020-06-01 21:53:28 +0000 UTCIt's got in the first panel
D Banks
2020-06-01 21:49:17 +0000 UTC
