145 Let Loose
I shrugged, "Yeah, sure."
Torix pointed upwards, "Let's go up to the fourth floor then."
I turned towards Althea, "How many floors are there?"
She raised a hand and counted on her finger...
2018-06-22 20:52:53 +0000 UTC View Post
I shrugged, "Yeah, sure."
Torix pointed upwards, "Let's go up to the fourth floor then."
I turned towards Althea, "How many floors are there?"
She raised a hand and counted on her finger...
2018-06-22 20:52:53 +0000 UTC View PostAt the same time, free didn't mean settling, at least not for me. We floated away before I turned back around. I observed the ground, Althea putting her elbow on the top of my head.
"What are you lo...
2018-06-18 01:59:57 +0000 UTC View PostWell, we didn't kill him. Hod did. I looked over at the one and only birdman. With vibrant splashes of yellow gunk over him, he laid on his knees beside Yawm's corpse. He heaved for breath. I regen...
2018-06-13 23:36:11 +0000 UTC View PostNo one answered Yawm since he held us in place. Yawm put his hands behind his back, interlocking his fingers. He walked up to me,
"You fought against my words for so long. I failed to break you afte...
2018-06-08 22:47:35 +0000 UTC View PostI got a notification. The assassin died, finally. I opened my status, poured my points into endurance, and I hit finalize all at once. Another deluge of power swelled through me. I leveled further, ga...
2018-06-06 02:29:58 +0000 UTC View PostThe eldritch charged towards the breakers. Yawm commanded them earlier. My mana only enraged them. As the eldritch rushed against them, I turned towards Yawm. I pulled in my armor and leaped towards h...
2018-06-01 22:21:50 +0000 UTC View PostKorga snapped, “I told you we didn’t bring an army.”
Yawm raised his eyebrows, “Really? Then whose army is it...We’ll discover soon.”
The conduit links built up in the back of my h...
2018-05-29 01:35:38 +0000 UTC View PostAs I dashed closer towards Yawm, Frode tossed something towards me. I turned around, seeing a net right at my nose. Before it made contact, my reflexes kicked into gear. A wave of gravitational energy...
2018-05-24 18:33:32 +0000 UTC View PostYawm turned between the two groups, wondering which he should pick. Yawm placed a hand on the world tree, closing his eyes. With a deep focus, he honed in and listened. Moments later, he raised his he...
2018-05-19 01:44:09 +0000 UTC View PostPeople mentioned that they didn't understand Amara's motivations or character very well. I took the time to elaborate on it this chapter and set up a fun next few chapters. Hope you guys enj...
2018-05-16 23:39:15 +0000 UTC View PostIncreasing the pacing of the story. Hope it isn't’t jarring. Let me know if it is.
I closed out the message, biting my lip. Before anything else, I composed a message back to Amara.
The overseer stayed silent. Yawm clapped his hands, a vicious delight infecting his voice,
“Is it so shocking to see me? Why does it stun you so?”
The overseer gripped his fist. As he did,...
2018-05-08 01:26:47 +0000 UTC View PostThe bojokans cowered in fear, all but their leader. The steel wires wobbled along his skin, the monster trembling. The force in his words slammed into me. I stayed steady, my will like iron. Yawm turn...
2018-05-04 17:27:30 +0000 UTC View Post
This details level ups for normal people and for Daniel. Yeah, he's a bit op now.
2018-05-03 21:58:41 +0000 UTC View PostI scratched my cheek, “How exactly are we going to hunt for the cipher?”
Yawm leaned back in his chair, “I gave the issue some thought, and I came to a realization - you learned the c...
2018-05-03 18:06:02 +0000 UTC View Post
This explains the dimensional cipher in further detail, like how I came up with the idea and what not. Hope you guys enjoyed it.
2018-05-01 18:49:56 +0000 UTC View PostI numbed myself, eliminating any thoughts about his accusation. I raised an eyebrow at Yawm. He stood up straight. He moved his hands between us, measuring our heights.
“Odd. I thought I not...
2018-04-30 22:54:37 +0000 UTC View Post
This is a video of my brainstorming process.
In case you guys are wondering, making these videos doesn't cut into my writing time. I've been wanting to do a youtube channel for a while now. It...
2018-04-29 02:29:34 +0000 UTC View Post
This explains how health regeneration works. I hope it helps as always.
2018-04-27 23:31:48 +0000 UTC View PostThe insects neared me, their shining mandibles clapping with enough power to split cars apart. It wouldn’t even hurt me, but I decided on practicing my skills. I leapt, dodged, and dashed between th...
2018-04-27 04:48:38 +0000 UTC View Post
Hope this helps guys. Spoiler if you haven't read up past chapter 110 or so.
2018-04-27 04:45:09 +0000 UTC View PostI stopped my face from curling up like a raisin, but it was a feat of sheer willpower. I paused, lost for words as I stared at her. Once I got my bearings, I finished what I was saying,
“Alright A...
2018-04-24 05:00:34 +0000 UTC View PostI sighed. Yawm walked over,
“What is it?”
I let him see the screen. Yawm scoffed,
“I wouldn’t worry about your exile. We have someone who can reconnect us to the system.”...
2018-04-19 00:15:02 +0000 UTC View PostI frowned at Yawm,
“What kind of contract?”
Yawm spread out his arms, “A contract written in the cipher. You’re actually the first being I’ve tried making one with.”
I narrow...
2018-04-17 22:59:55 +0000 UTC View PostMy goal here is to humanize Daniel and make him more relatable. Let me know if it worked.
Yawm leaned forward, resting his elbows on his knees. He rested his chin onto his hands,
“R...
2018-04-12 19:36:05 +0000 UTC View PostBut just like everyone else, she would learn soon enough. If I had anything to say about it, my mana generation would be the talk of legends. Amara gestured towards me with a palm,
“You may begin ...
2018-04-10 03:57:46 +0000 UTC View PostYawm laughed, “Hah, hah. It seems as though I’ve run into several talents that defy expectation. One is a mysterious warrior clad in black armor and the other is an eldritch that knows a way into ...
2018-04-09 00:25:31 +0000 UTC View PostI pulled her up, an uneasy chill running up my spine,
“How is it that everyone knows I’m some harbinger?”
The eerie lips on her face grinned. It was like watching a doll smile with teeth...
2018-04-04 02:49:44 +0000 UTC View Post