RPG-Analysis: Daniel #2
Rpg Analysis Daniel #2: Dimension C-138, the Harbinger of Cataclysm
Spoilers up to chapter 121. Read that before reading this.
This analysis was a long time c...
2018-03-28 03:10:33 +0000 UTC View Post
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121 What Lies Around Us
I put a foot on the squirming creature, “Well, uh...It’s called Baldowah’s Wrath.”
Yawm turned towards me, finding my foot on the squirming thing. It latched onto me as Yawm lifted a hand, 2018-03-28 02:51:38 +0000 UTC View Post
120 Eyes of Old
Yawm dashed towards me, the ground cracking beneath him. I shouted, “Remember, we’re fighting to learn.”
He reached me as I flared my runes. He swatted the back of his hand towards me. It was ...
2018-03-22 18:25:49 +0000 UTC View Post119 Watchful Waiting
I crossed my arms, “Where would we fight?”
Yawm lowered his arms, “In an arena I'll create. We won’t have to worry about destroying everything around us either. You won’t have to hold back...
2018-03-16 05:21:48 +0000 UTC View Post118 Deep Water
I had fun writing this chapter. I feel like I'm back into the swing of things at least. Hope you guys enjoy the chap.
I shrugged, “Yawm’s been keeping me busy. I’m sorry.”
Alt...
2018-03-14 00:45:55 +0000 UTC View Post117 Leverage
Guys, I red-did the last chapter and made it much better. I got back onto the basics, like setting the scene, using descriptions, and taking away a lot of the to-be verbs littering my prose. It ma...
2018-03-12 06:04:05 +0000 UTC View Post116 Galactic
The black vial exploded in front of me, cloaking me in a dense cloud of black smoke. I was right. Something changed their minds about leaving me alone. What exactly? I didn’t know. I did know they j...
2018-02-27 05:10:28 +0000 UTC View Post115 Levelers
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Different Pov this chapter.
We finally got onto this world. It took several mission’s worth of salary to hire a black market mage, but it was worth ...
2018-02-13 21:46:11 +0000 UTC View Post114 The Distance
Hearing the words made me want to panic, but I stayed calm. I took a step back from Keeja,
“What do you mean run?”
Keeja’s head twitched. A moment later, I walked forward and placed a ha...
2018-02-08 22:58:52 +0000 UTC View Post113 Fundamental
I nodded, “Yeah, I am.”
Yawm leaned back all his weight onto his back foot, giving him room to peer at me,
“No fear? That’s disappointing. The most fearful candidates tend to last the ...
2018-02-04 06:17:04 +0000 UTC View Post112 Confrontation
I tapped one of my fingers on the armrest of my chair,
“Why do you need her, and what do you intend to do with her exactly?”
Yawm steepled his fingers, “It begins with a story from my pa...
2018-02-02 19:39:31 +0000 UTC View Post111 An Enigma
Yawm was two heads taller than me. He was wider too. It was obvious that he was stronger than me. It was an immutable fact, and there was no way he didn’t know it either. Every part of this situatio...
2018-01-28 23:08:58 +0000 UTC View Post110 Yawm of Flesh
It was a weird feeling when the words left my lips. I didn’t expect them, but they fit what was going through my head. Maybe it was the hormones talking too. At that point, it was hard to tell.
A ...
2018-01-28 02:40:00 +0000 UTC View Post109 Calm Before the Storm
Ajax looked at me then back at Hod. He cupped his chin,
“Are...” He spread out his arms, “Wait, is this a human custom?”
Althea bust out laughing before I shook my hands back and forth...
2018-01-23 17:36:19 +0000 UTC View Post108 New Hope
With that in mind, I kept my experiments tame. I wasn’t about to try and fuse to different existences together like Yawm was. My goals were simple: get stronger, faster, and better. Considering I co...
2018-01-19 17:00:59 +0000 UTC View Post107 Ajax Volan
I watched the ball of light float over the city and reach the legion’s battle. Whenever the light hit the ground, I lost my vision. My vision returned a moment later. The light singed my eyesight. I...
2018-01-16 23:02:43 +0000 UTC View Post106 It Comes
I frowned, “What?”
Ajax spoke with a voice like metal,
“We need to escape, before he awakens. You cannot fight him.”
I kept my guard up, “I don’t trust you.”
Ajax ste...
2018-01-11 15:49:46 +0000 UTC View Post105 Betrayal
For reference, here is Elijah's levels'n'stuff. I should have had it added at some point in the previous chapter, so sorry about that guys. I'm adding it now. I should have added a title for Dakmh...
2018-01-09 20:13:31 +0000 UTC View Post104 War
The legion of soldiers thundered out. The roar of approval lasted for a full minute before I turned towards the barrier. Before we marched through it, I needed to finish off my speech with a bang. You...
2018-01-08 20:01:05 +0000 UTC View Post103 To Plan
She ran up, grabbing towards the rifle. I lifted it up, grinning at her,
“Come on you gotta try harder than that.”
She morphed her arm, the oversized arm grasping the rifle. The stre...
2018-01-07 04:19:01 +0000 UTC View PostDaniel
Bulked him up, toned down a few of the spikes, got some runes, and gave him the one eye slit. I think it's pretty damn awesome.
2018-01-06 00:26:20 +0000 UTC View Post102 Respite
My head popped back, “Wait...You aren’t going to fight anymore...period?”
She shook her head back and forth, “No. I told you already. I’m done.”
I leaned down, my stomach sinking f...
2018-01-05 20:36:46 +0000 UTC View PostDaniel(First Version)
Let me know what you guys think about this. I want to get an idea of the thoughts about the illustrations before I make it official.
Personally, I think it's awesome. I can get the artist to adjust ...
2018-01-04 23:32:06 +0000 UTC View Post101 Breaking Through
I finished my war cry before falling back onto my knees. I glanced around at the destruction. Six blocks were leveled, piles of rubble all that remained of them. Gaping holes littered several stores n...
2018-01-01 00:41:19 +0000 UTC View Post100 An Unstoppable Force
The confident smile on the mouths vanished. I dashed towards the monster, adjusting my approach. Kessiah shot out a lightning fast straight at my face. I sunk into the earth as I spun on my heels. Wit...
2017-12-28 22:24:54 +0000 UTC View Post99 The Wrath of A Lich
The eldritch laughed, its wounded body shaking. It lifted its hand, glancing at its torn wrist,
“I do ponder in my own manner...Why am I not regenerating my wounds?”
The eldritch looked at...
2017-12-28 22:23:34 +0000 UTC View Post98 To Corrupt
I dashed towards the monster as it swung its sword of coalesced energy at me. Before the wave of blinding light washed over me, I dived into the ground. I drilled around and shot up from under him. I ...
2017-12-28 22:21:57 +0000 UTC View Post97 Cataclysm Comes
I raised both my hands, “Wait a second. Calm down, and let’s talk about this for a minute. Where are your guards?”
Torix raised an eyebrow, “What guards?”
I snapped my fingers a few ...
2017-12-28 22:20:33 +0000 UTC View Post96 The Dash
Here's a few chapters guys. Hope you enjoy the big block of content. Let me know if you enjoyed it in this format.
The rest didn't last mostly because I didn’t want to sit there forever. ...
2017-12-28 22:18:59 +0000 UTC View PostGoals Update: 12/21/2017
Hope this helps explain where I'm at and where I'm going.
2017-12-21 21:26:55 +0000 UTC View Post