FINAL July Build-A-Sequence Question: Give me some Sequence Details!
Added 2022-07-19 01:36:25 +0000 UTCThis sequence is to the point it has a great barebones outline! Here's what we've got so far:
Starting Character:
Sara, a female elusive thief who dresses in tight leather with short hair and a cut across her eye. She is missing sight in that eye,
She has a strong desire to help those less fortunate.
Turns into:
HERM anthro fox (who keeps the facial scar and missing sight in the eye)
TRIGGER:
While robbing a notorious pharma-billionaire she discovers her secret lab, and gets bitten setting a fox lab animal free.
NOW!
I've done sequences with less information than what we've got - but this is a community built-a-sequence and with the info above, there's still a lot of room for extra info and I want some more input from you all!
So now Write-in SOME SEQUENCE DETAILS!
I will likely pick a number of then that I like that don't contradict each other.
This could be anything from details about Sara's backstory or plans, outfit details, what her reaction to the change is, a particular image you want to see, a focus on a particular part of the change (ie, a comic page showing the feet TF),etc etc etc!
One POST per person - but heads up that if you give me a lot of ideas, I may pick and choose some but not all of them (or none at all).
Keep in mind that this is going to be one self-contained sequence, so if a suggestion would necessitate extending the sequence beyond the typical 10-ish pages of a Build-A-Sequence, I probably won't choose it.
Have fun - and I'll look forward to seeing your ideas!
I'll leave this open for a bit, and leave this open until SUNDAY JULY 24; I plan on working on the sequence next week!
Comments
I put together a possible backstory for this lab. - The lab is developing a mutagen in an attempt to apply specific traits of one animal onto another. Their goal is to create designer pets. With future ambitions to create designer babies... And obedient war beasts. The animal that bites the thief is a failed test subject, set to be euthanized. They were trying to make a lab rat grow fox fur, but they almost completely turned it into a fox instead. Some rat traits remain (Like its furless rat tail maybe), But at first glance, it looks like a fox. The mutagen was supposed to become inert after performing its task and be safely expelled through the subjects bodily fluids over the course of a week. After additional testing, the researchers discovered that the mutagen remained active within the test subject instead. Dangerous quantities of the active mutagen would remain within the subjects fluids for this week long period. The subject was set to be euthanized due to safety concerns. The mutagen was made using dna from a male fox.
DTMMP
2022-07-24 04:59:03 +0000 UTCWell, in theory, if the fox were simply male, it could still make her herm by adding male characteristics that Sara doesn't already have to her female ones. Just like she's becoming an anthro fox (human/fox hybrid) by adding fox characteristics to her human ones.
Arania
2022-07-21 05:26:01 +0000 UTCWhy else would it make her herm if it didn't have those characteristics for itself?
Reverb
2022-07-21 03:08:43 +0000 UTCA minor suggestion regarding the paw TF: how about, instead of bursting through the shoes, her heels lift out of them as they grow. **see the werewolf TF from the 3rd Harry Potter film for what I mean.
Dylan Elliott
2022-07-19 16:42:42 +0000 UTCFor one of the first pannels, a shot of her from behind with a tail slipping through her clothes, her tight pants ripping open sugestivly from the changes at her waist. She's trying to look over her shoulder to see what that feeling growing from her coccyx, maybe reaching behind herself to grab it. She seems smart so it would be cool if she catches on to whats happening to her body pretty quickly once the changes start, give her more time to process it rather then being in shock throughout.
Ulysses Duckler
2022-07-19 15:23:46 +0000 UTCHer new cock grows first, so she thinks it's just a gender TF, and then her new teats start to grow. The bottom pair of boobs wrap around her cock, squeezing it pleasurably even if she tries to resist!
fur108108
2022-07-19 14:52:13 +0000 UTCLove this idea! <3
fur108108
2022-07-19 14:46:59 +0000 UTCOh I like this. Why tf just once?
JourneymanIK
2022-07-19 06:13:05 +0000 UTCHer reverting to human somewhat while still keeping the Herm features from the transformation intact. Like waking up naked thinking it's a bad dream, looking down at her new genitals and realizing, it wasn't.
Guy Fawkes
2022-07-19 06:05:20 +0000 UTCHer new sheath growing in while her tail grows between her legs popping the front of her pants open :0
Acre
2022-07-19 04:07:05 +0000 UTCTwo extra sets of nipples appear and fill out into two new sets of breasts in descending cup sizes as she fondles her new sheath. They finish their growth just as her new testes big their glacial drop in front of her now canid femme bits.
JourneymanIK
2022-07-19 03:58:17 +0000 UTCIn theory, I could see the fox that bites her being either male or herm (since it's going to be a genetic ad-mixture, and she's becoming part human part fox (anthro) in theory it could be the same with gender, but suggesting the fox being herm as your suggestion is perfectly valid!
Arania
2022-07-19 03:44:53 +0000 UTCA personal message was sent to me about the suggestion - and I agree - I don't want to promote ableistic themes of having to "fix" a disability. It's a lot more empowering, I think, to show her being competent with that feature maintained through the TF
Arania
2022-07-19 03:44:10 +0000 UTCHah, I like that idea, too!
Arania
2022-07-19 03:43:00 +0000 UTCIt was one of my examples given above of possible sorts of things you guys can suggest :)
Arania
2022-07-19 03:41:45 +0000 UTCMy goal is to work on the art next week and have it finished in time for the update :)
Arania
2022-07-19 03:40:39 +0000 UTCThat fox may not have been the only herm that was released, though it’s the only one that stays after infecting Sara.
Cydra
2022-07-19 02:51:48 +0000 UTCthe transformation should start after she escaped from the lab and returned home, personally I would start with the pupil change that even if she only has one eye improves her vision a lot, the clothes she wears are for female forms so penis growth it creates a tear from which it emerges, the same goes for the voluminous tail and shoes that tear with the transformation of the feet. I hope you like it !
Marco Ferrari
2022-07-19 02:50:02 +0000 UTCI’m sorry, mb. I musta misread something
Christopher Zammit
2022-07-19 02:40:43 +0000 UTCThe last build a sequence post was a poll for the character description and in it arania described it as for her starting appearance.
Reverb
2022-07-19 02:30:37 +0000 UTCWhere was that?
Christopher Zammit
2022-07-19 02:27:34 +0000 UTCArania said they'd keep the injury post-tf in one of the posts. I can't remember which one, but it mighta been in the suggestions for the character
Christopher Zammit
2022-07-19 02:25:29 +0000 UTCOut of curiosity, any chance we'll see part of the sequence in the next site update?
Christopher Zammit
2022-07-19 02:18:59 +0000 UTCThe fox that bit her is herm. It would make sense. Also where in patreon was it decided that she would keep the facial scar and missing sight in the eye?
Reverb
2022-07-19 02:16:52 +0000 UTCThe fox that bit her teams up with her? Cool
Christopher Zammit
2022-07-19 02:01:24 +0000 UTCShe fully returns to her career with new notoriety and a fox sidekick.
NineTailSymbologist
2022-07-19 01:52:53 +0000 UTCEyepatch to make her look more badass. Captured by the evil billionaire in the end, becomes new test subject.
Christopher Zammit
2022-07-19 01:41:50 +0000 UTCI like the comic showing the feet change idea!
JazzFly5
2022-07-19 01:40:16 +0000 UTC
