Fallout sunburst 18_01
Added 2025-04-03 13:47:23 +0000 UTC
The sound work has not been done yet.
Comments
It's great. Fantastic and I loved every moment of it. But I think 'probing attack' is a better term than guerilla attack.
TrueBlob
2025-04-05 18:11:35 +0000 UTCFantastic work on this moment of downtime, i like that even the Paladins dont have a moment to rest and are stuck inside their power armor incase of an emergency. Just some minor grammatical fixes to tighten up the dialogue. At 1:14 "Half of it Remains" might come off as too stiff, you can go for either "Half remaining" or "Got half left" depending of if you want to be more serious or casual for the grunts. At 1:40: "They aims to deplete our ammo," is unfortunately incorrect, it should either be "They aim to" or "Their aim is to" very minor error, totally get it if it was just a slip up At: 1:52: "... snipers to counter the enemy snipers positioned along" You can ditch the 'The' for something smoother, "We've deployed a few of our own snipers to counter enemy snipers along the surrounding ridges" or you can say "We've deployed a few counter snipers to keep an eye on the surrounding ridges." Keep up the amazing work Sodaz looking forward to the rest of it!
Tojo
2025-04-05 04:35:14 +0000 UTCNCR์ ๋ฑ์ฅํ ๋๋ง๋ค ๋ผ๋ก ์ฃฝ์ด๋๊ฐ๋ฉด์๋ ๋ณด๊ธ์ ๊ด์ฐฎ์ ๋ณด์ด๋๋ฐ BoS๋ ์ด์ ์๋์ง ๋ฌด๊ธฐ๋ ํ๋๋ ๋ณด์ด์ง ์๊ณ ๋ ธํํ ๊ฒ์ผ๋ก ๋ณด์ด๋ ์ ์์์ด๊ณผ ๋ฐ๋ฏผํธ ๋ผ์ดํ์ ์ฐ๊ณ ์๋ค์. NCR์ ์ ์ ์ ํฌ์์ ๋ฌด๋ฆ ์ฐ๊ณ ๋ฐ๋ณต์ ์ธ ๊ณต๊ฒฉ์ ๊ฐํด์ BoS๋ฅผ ํผ๊ณคํ๊ฒ ํ๊ณ ๋ฌผ์๋ฅผ ๋ฐ๋ฅ๋๊ฒ ํ ๋ค์, ์๊ท๋ชจ ๊ณต๊ฒฉ์กฐ์ฐจ ๋ง์๋ด์ง ๋ชปํ๊ฒ ๋๋ฉด ๊ทธ๋ ์ด๊ณต๊ฒฉ์ ๊ฐํ๋ ๊ฒ์ผ๊น์? ๋งฅ๋๋ง๋ผ๊ฐ ์ด๋ ์์ ์ ์ฒ ์๋ฅผ ๊ฒฐ์ ํ ์ง ๊ถ๊ธํ๋ค์
๋ณธ์ ๊ตฌ
2025-04-04 00:38:52 +0000 UTCThis must be that โwaves upon waves until we ran out of ammunitionโ detail Hardin was going off onโฆ.
Yukinu
2025-04-03 23:23:01 +0000 UTCThis is the beginning of the end it seems. I wonder how the final push will look like. Super excited to see that!
Hoang Vu
2025-04-03 16:20:46 +0000 UTC
