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Added 2016-04-30 21:48:46 +0000 UTCComments
Thank you very much! Kaorh will arrive in a new decor. It's from now on that everything will start! ^^
Raghan
2016-05-01 13:48:28 +0000 UTCHi Matthew! Yes, you are right! I forgot the tattoo on the forehead of Kaorh on all the boxes, and the cum on the last two boxes. I think I was tired, because this tattoo is important. XD The forget cum is less important, we can assume that he wiped his head, especially since the characters are small on the boxes for that we can distinguish correctly. I made a correction of the page, after your remarks, and I just made an update links. Also, I changed the head of Kaorh who receive her necklace, because I consider it was botched and poorly drawn. It is not easy to reproduce identically the same head, several times on all angles. :)
Raghan
2016-05-01 13:42:02 +0000 UTCI noticed some continuity errors in the artwork on this page. Kaorh's tattoo on his forehead is absent throughout as if it magically disappeared. There is no semen on his face in the sixth panel nor in the seventh panel. In the fifth panel, Kaorh's muzzle and nose seem to have shrunk while Blade was putting the collar around his neck. Aside from these mistakes, I liked what was happening so far. Will you make the corrections for the colored pages?
Beastly Feastly
2016-05-01 02:32:55 +0000 UTCHmm. I wonder what is gonna happen to Kaorh next. Great work as always Raghan!
Barrus Burr
2016-04-30 23:31:11 +0000 UTC
