sleepyras

(WIP) Biscut belly worship (5/5) - poll winner (take 2)

Added 2025-04-10 21:18:02 +0000 UTC

alright! so i decided to start all over and re-think how i wanted to do this idea, a "take 2" if you will. since the last one had 0 narritive or structure, i really wanted to sit down and think of something that could be a lil narritive. (and also plays to both their strenghts more as well)

fixes im gonna do:

Panel 1: im gonna make Biscut grope his belly, and possibly make him slightly fatter, and add his missing eye.

Panel 2: i need to change Ras's expression a bit, and add Biscuts missing eye (poor fellow)

Panel 3: Biscut's arm looks a bit whack here, and his face is a bit off to me.

Panel 4 & 5: i think this looks mostly alright, just need to add Biscut's hand on Ras to pin him to his belly.

the dialogue i'd say im mostly happy with but i might still tweak it a bit.

also gonna add the background as well! decided to have it be at a bus stop, because i figure a bus stop is a good excuse to have them be together like this.