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Some help with some Spanish required

This one is for any Spanish speakers out there.

I'm currently editing red and black 'symbiote' harlots.  As part of their characters, both use a little bit of Spanish slang and cursing.  'Black' is hinted to be more Mexican, and wears a black bodysuit and sugar skull mask.  'Red' is hinted to be more traditional Spanish, and wears an exotic red flamenco dress.  They both hate each other.

I can do the basic stuff, so expect plenty of usages of puta and leche.

There are some phrases where I'm less confident, and wouldn't mind some other eyeballs giving them a check.

Black Symbiote (Mexican Spanish)

[The stink of that whore is all over you.]
"¡El hedor de esa puta te cubre!"

[Cheap ass! (player doesn't have money for socialising drinks)]
"¡Tacaño hijo de puta!" she says.

[Time to wank a nice sample out of you...]
Time to chaqueta a nice sample out of you for my producer.
(Chaqueta is the Mexican slang, I think, but I'm not sure what the verb construct would look like here.)

Red Symbiote (Spanish Spanish)

[Generic insult for the player being out of money again.]
...
(I don't have anything here, so any suggestions welcome.  Ideally looking for the sort of insult a posh Spanish woman would throw at a 'low-class' man for being poor and useless)

[it stinks of rotten vagina]
The stench is vile.  Huele a chocho podrido.
(The sentence is sort of right from google translate, but I don't know if it's something that would naturally be said.)

Both - An appropriate nickname for them to call the player

The other thing that distinguishes them is that they each have a different term of affection/endearment for the player.  I think the standard equivalents for dear or darling are things like:

mi amor
mi cariño
mi corazón
mi cielo
mi chulo

Those are my backups, but ideally I'd like them to use something a little more derogatory - the sort of nickname a girlfriend might give that's annoying or embarrassing.  Something along the lines of my little poodle or similarly silly, but is actually used.

Any suggestions and help much appreciated!

Comments

Merry Christmas you horny wankers! :D Hopefully y'all found a succubus under the tree that's as nice as Nicole. I feel like that could be a good Inari one shot. Inari sends a "good" succubus for a nice guy while the "coal" succubus is for a bad guy.

Najee

Thanks for the clarifications. I'll switch the out of money phrases over.

Many-Eyed Hydra

"Tacaño" I would use if you want to use something more like... insult you could say "Agarrado de mierda", "Puto vagabundo" "Mendigo de mierda" Refering he is like a homeless or someone short of money. "Chocho podrido" childlish way to say something you could say "Esto huele a coño pocho" o "Esto huele a pescaderia" refering to a fish smell For the Mexican i don't think the word tacaño is all acceptable: I mean, you could use something like "Amarrete" refering he is not someone who share money something like "Amarrete de mierda" or "Vete a la verga, Amarrete de mierda" refusing to be with him. For "Hedor" is a very classy way to say smell, i could say "Peste" "Olor", something like "La peste de esa puta te cubre" or "Hueles a puta viejo"

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