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INTEMPERANCE VIII - Chapter 20, Rally Around the Family

How the Best family reacts to the death of their patriarch. How Laura and Joey react to the death of their father. Just a small step into the Best world before we move on with the main story. As al...

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INTEMPERANCE VIII - Chapter 19, South Island Blur

The tale of the trip to New Zealand and some tension that is starting to develop among some of the characters. Let me know what you think.

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INTEMPERANCE VIII - Chapter 18, Big Ol' Jet Airliner

A chapter about traveling a long distance. Hopefully anyone who has been on a long, overnight flight can relate. As always, let me know how I'm doing. I'm on track to return to work mid-August, so ...

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INTEMPERANCE VII - Chapter 17, Teach Me

My medical leave has been extended until mid-August. I'm actually doing well. The original problem that put me in the hospital has resolved. I just need to work on recovering the stamina to go back...

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INTEMPERANCE VIII - Chapter 16, She Had a Ticket to Ride

Moving toward the end of 2003 in this chapter. Some significant changes take place with the Kingsley household, Helen takes a little flight with Jake, and Matt has some concerns. Keep the comments ...

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INTEMPERANCE VIII - Chapter 15, Changes in the Routine

Another chapter that moves the story a little bit further along and ties up some loose threads started in the previous few chapters. A little longer of a chapter than most, but I had a lot to say i...

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INTEMPERANCE VIII - Chapter 14, Holy Water and the Plans We Make

I'm sure everyone has noticed my production is way up this month. Hopefully no one minds four chapters this month. There is a story behind it. I came down with a fairly serious gastrointestinal iss...

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INTEMPERANCE VIII - Chapter 13, Foreign Affairs

I've been off work for a bit, so I've been able to do a lot of writing, thus the early next chapter. This one continues to build characters and move the story along down its path and introduces a f...

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INTEMPERANCE VIII - Chapter 12, Movin' On Up

This was a fun chapter for me to write even though it starts off with some sadness. It covers Caydee's first day of kindergarten and goes into more detail and character building of the two new char...

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INTEMPERANCE CHARACTER SHEET

No charge for this post as it is not a story chapter. A few people have expressed interest in how I keep track of all the characters in the Intemperance story. The answer is the character sheet tha...

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INTEMPERANCE VIII - Chapter 11, Changing of the Guard

A transitional chapter and one that moves things a little further down the road and introduces some new characters. A possible squick for a some readers in this one but what I'm talking will become...

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Help a writer out.

No charge for this post as it is not a story chapter but a plea for a little help. Okay, loyal patrons who know more about the details of this story than I do. I know that some people in their live...

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INTEMPERANCE VIII - Chapter 10, Baby Blues

Having a new one in the house while relatives visit. Always fun. The stories of the little balls and the pee in the face are from my own experience with having a boy after girls. Totally true stori...

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INTEMPERANCE VIII - Chapter 9, Welcome to the Machine

A very important chapter in the tale. After a long wait, things have moved along. Let me know how I did. Hopefully I resolved the Celia and her parents' situation to everyone's satisfaction. if not...

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INTEMPERANCE VIII - Chapter 8, Only the Beginning

The next chapter moves things down the road a bit. C's pregnancy is getting more advanced and other characters are starting to come into their own. As always, let me know what you think. Remember, ...

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INTEMPERANCE VIII - Chapter 7, They Couldn't Tell Me What it Was For

This one goes into politics a little more than I usually do, but I'm not really looking for debates. I would just like to say that I am not writing this with the 20/20 hindsight of having already l...

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INTEMPERANCE VIII - Chapter 6, Learning to Fly

This is a mostly lighthearted chapter but it brings us to the beginning of a significant period of American history, a period that affected me personally and changed many of my views. It will likel...

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INTEMPERANCE VIII - Chapter 5, What Was Your Name?

Sorry it took so long to get this one out. In addition to dealing with some personal issues of real life, I just found this chapter a hard one to get started, a bit of writer's block cramping my br...

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INTEMPERANCE VIII - Chapter 4, The Circus Returns

Here is Chapter 4. I am back to work now, Achilles all healed (or so it seems) after six weeks off of sitting on my ass and keeping weight off the foot as much as possible. Two twelve hour shifts d...

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INTEMPERANCE VIII - Chapter 3, Start Spreading the News

I have been more productive this month thanks to having torn my Achilles tendon which has left me unable to work or do much of anything but keep weight off my foot as much as possible. Fortunately,...

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INTEMPERANCE VIII - Chapter 2, Little Passenger

The tour goes on and so do the lives of Jake, Celia, Laura, and Caydee. Did Celia's baby make it through the fallopian tube to its destination? Is she really pregnant at all? These questions are an...

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INTEMPERANCE VIII - Chapter 1, Runnin' Down This Dusty Road

Here is the first chapter of Book 8 of the Intemperance series. I hope you like it. And, again, please don't read too much into cameo appearances by past characters. The one in this chapter is mean...

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INTEMPERANCE VII - Never Say Never, complete

No charge as this is not a story chapter. Intemperance VII is now available in final edit form on both Amazon and Bookapy.

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INTEMPERANCE VII - Chapter 24, Never Say Never

And so the final chapter of Book VII is posted. Not much of a cliffhanger this time, only a little one. Book VIII will begin shortly, so please stay with me. As always, let me know how I did and ho...

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INTEMPERANCE VII - Chapter 23, I Remember You

This was supposed to be the last chapter of the book, but, as things work out, I will need at least one more to wrap it up. This one turned out to be more than I was expecting. Please... please do ...

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INTEMPERANCE VII - Chapter 22, Aunt Flo

Another transitional chapter that is bringing us toward the end of this volume. Once again, I've underestimated how much story I would tell in this volume of the series. I am nearing the end of the...

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INTEMPERANCE VII - Chapter 21, Fools Rush In

Moving things along in the Celia, Jake, and Laura relationship. As always, let me know how I'm doing. Your input really does help shape the story and I value it, even if I don't always follow it. T...

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INTEMPERANCE VII - Chapter 20, The Circus Comes to Town

I had a couple days off from work and was able to finish the next chapter for you all. This one is particularly pivotal to the tale and covers a considerable length of months in universe, but it mo...

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INTEMPERANCE VII - Chapter 19, Strange Things Seen

Mostly a lighthearted chapter with some seriousness at the end, it's purpose to show how life for the characters is moving on after the events of 9/11. Everything about Wonder Woman that was writte...

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INTEMPERANCE VII - Chapter 18, Living in the Aftermath

Here is the latest. I'm trying my best to move us on from one of the most significant events in recent history. Also, the story of Matt getting caught with marijuana at the airport checkpoint is a ...

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